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Nowadays drugs are getting more and more popular, especially among young people. It is a common knowledge, that some of the drugs have less serious side effects than the others. These are called 'soft drugs'. There are a few countries which have allowed their inhabitants to use soft drugs. What are the drawbacks and benefits of taking such a step?

First and foremost, taking drugs leads to health problems. Lungs, kidneys and liver can suffer from them and become unable to work correctly. What is more, drugs can also affect the mind. People who have contact with substances like cannabis have a weak ability of concentrating, they get distracted very easily and can not focus on anything. They may also have a problem with their memory. Moreover, drugs are very addictive, no matter if they are soft or hard, once you have taken them, it may be difficult to cut them out.

On the other hand, soft drugs are considered to be a great source of pleasure. In this aspect they hardly do not differ from drinks based on alcohol or cigarettes. In addition, some of the soft drugs have their usage in medicine. They are an effective treatment, which may heal specific illnesses. Last, but not least, purchasing drugs does not make problem in these days. Making them legal will probably result in better quality and lower prices.

To sum up, legalising soft drugs has its drawbacks and benefits. However, in my opinion it is still to early to introduce such a solution.
edytowany przez jenon: 05 kwi 2014
It is 'a ' (niepotr) common knowledge, that some of the drugs have less serious side effects than 'the' (niepotr) others.
There are a few countries which have allowed their 'inhabitants' (slowo ok, ale cos mi nie gra) to use soft drugs.
First and foremost, taking (tutaj napisz czy 'soft' czy 'hard' czy 'all') drugs leads to health problems. Lungs, kidneys and liver can suffer from them and become unable to work 'correctly' (ja lubie 'properly').

In this aspect they hardly 'do not' (niepotr- bo to zmienia zdanie) differ from 'drinks based on alcohol' (lepiej 'alcoholic drinks') or cigarettes. In addition, some of the soft drugs have 'their' (niepotr) usage in medicine. They are an effective treatment, which may heal specific illnesses (daj przyklady). Last, but not least, purchasing drugs 'does not make' (nie, cos nie tak, lepiej 'is not a') problem 'in' (niepotr) these days.
(mozna tez dodac, ze gdyby byl VAT na 'oficjalnej' sprzedazy, to kraj bylby bogatszy)

However, in my opinion it is still 'to' (blad ortog) early to introduce such a solution.

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