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In times of increasing development of the Internet, people seek 'for' (niepotrzebne slowo) convenient ways to improve their quality of life. One of (tu brakuje przedimka, niestety sama musisz poszukac jakiego) ,'manners' (to jest zle slowo, zle Ci ten slownik tlumaczy, tutaj ma byc 'ways') is e-learning, a 'process of teaching' (lepiej ...a teaching process) based on the Internet which uses various electronic technology in (tutaj mi brakuje jakiegos slowa - poszukaj jakie moze pasowac) education. Some experts say that this kind of learning has equally as many advantages as 'disadvantage' (daj tutaj l. mnoga).
One of major advantages of e-learning is undoubtedly (brak przedimka) flexibility and general availability, which 'allow' (tutaj ja widze 'allows') people from around the world (tu cos brakuje) use this method of education. In addition, people who are disabled(,) (nie dawaj przecinka, jak po nim masz tylko jedno wiecej stwierszenie, tutaj wtedy pasuje 'and' albo 'or') suffer from some ailments gain a possibility of personal growth and improvement of (tutaj brakuje slowa odpowiadajace 'ich') educational level. Moreover, this option is also aimed 'to' AT (you aim something AT a woman) women who 'having' (nie, tutaj ma byc slowo 'have'-maja) children and not enough money to find a good babysitter.
The first negative 'aspects' (nie, tu musi byc l. poj, bo piszesz 'first aspect',) of e-learning is that it requires a lot of perseverance and determination from 'their' (nie, jak masz 'first' - to wtedy musi byc 'its', jak chcesz zmienic i dac 'the negative aspects' to mozesz zostawic 'their') learners, because e-learning occurs out of (przedimek) classroom and also people are not 'obligated' (tutaj moze byc silniejsze slowo, np. 'forced') to go to school.
Taking everything into consideration there is no doubt that e-learning has many advantages, gives the chance of self-development to (przedimek) disabled, 'ill' (w jakim sensie? bo mysle, ze disabled to moze znaczy to samo) or busy people.