Some people say that (brak przedimka) person should make an important decision alone. Others say that (przedimek) person should make an important decision with (przedimke) help from other people. Which 'statement' (co za dziwne podejscie, to nie jest 'statement' ktory jest 'better' tylko 'point of view') is better in your opinion?
Important decisions are crucial moments in (przedimek) human life. Those decisions are able to change 'our' (dlaczego piszesz 'our' - co ja mam z tym wspolnego- poszukaj inne slowo) whole life and change 'our' (popraw) attitude because of big changes that we 'have' (wg mnie niepotr) never expected. Some decisions are too important and 'we' (to znaczy 'ty i ja'?) should consult with other people for example family or friends. So, we 'rather should' (zla kolejnosc slow) count 'for' (zle slowo - tutaj ON) help from people or society.
'Firstly' (ja jakos lubie 'first' ale wczoraj czytalam, ze to jest bardzo staroswieckie - musze sie zatem przyzwyczaic do 'firstly), we shouldn’t make decisions without (przedimek) family because we can 'destroy something without asking' (tego nie rozumiem - napisz dokladniej). (przedimek) family is really helpful when we want to undertake a decision. Especially, parents (tutaj ja dalabym WHO) have a 'big' (cos tego slowo nie za bardzo lubie - more 'major') influence which decision we should make. Usually, our parents know everything about us and have a 'bigger' (poszukaj inne slowo) decision making experience than we HAVE. Parents give a lot of 'advices' (nie, to jest zle, to jest niepol 'advice') and they always tell us, how we should 'acting' (nie, tutaj 'act') with some decision. If we want (cos brak) make an important decision, we should almost always ask parents what we should do. However, if we have other important people in our families we should ask (cos tu brak na koncu, moze 'them'?).
Secondly, if we have friends we can ask them instead (cos brak) making a decision alone.
If we have a problem we firstly go to friends and we 'are telling' (nie, to jest zly czas - tutaj 'tell') them about the problem. Friends will 'have' (nie, to jest zle slowo - tutaj 'give') 'a' (niepotr) good advice and they will help with 'hard' (poszukaj inne slowo,) decisions. 'Big' (znowu to 'big' - poszukaj inne slowo) amount of friends can change (napisz kogo? tu brakuje tego) thinking about certain decisions.
However, some people can have (przedimek) bad influence and we can make a bad decision. Sometimes we shouldn’t ask people whoM we don’t know yet. It can be dangerous because some people can use (tutaj wg mnie brakuje...the knowledge about) our problems against us and they will help us to make a bad decision. So, if we want we have to have trust 'to' (zle slowo - tutaj IN) that person (ale mozna ..want we have to trust that person).
To sum up, making a decision alone is not (przedimek) good idea. Making a decision with others is the easiest way to success (przecinek przed slowem 'but') but we should be aware OF 'who knows' (moze lepiej ' is aware of') 'about' (niepotr) (przedimek) decision we want (cos brak) make.
Zrob cos z tymi przedimkami (a, an, the). Musisz je uzywac.