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Changes are what escorts us through our life from the very beginning. It is something that happens whether we want it or not. Changes create people as they are now and as they will be in future. It is not easy to pick the most important changes up but certainly every single change has great influence on future.
I am not entirely sure if things I remember were the most important in my life but I definitely can name them remarkable.
Firstly it was moving to a new place. I was about seven at the time. I moved to a new town, new environment. I was forced to leave friends from the old place and start over.
The feeling of the anxiety before meeting new people became my best companion. I was also in fear of new duties as a first- year pupil of the elementary school. Now I know it opened me to new challenges and gave me a lot of self- confidence.
Second significant change took place when I graduated from high school and got first real job. It began a new period in my life. I realized how hard is to earn some money and I also found out that money doesn’t grow on trees. It also has great influence on me till today.
To sum up, changes are necessary in our life. This process creates our personality.
If it weren’t for changes we wouldn’t be able to develop and gain new experiences.