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Nowadays we observe a lot of accidents with exotic animals which are keep in houses like a pets.
It is not easy to create a good conditions to live for them.

First of all, we must remember about dangerous nature exotic animals. The majority of them can easy kill us. It is not hobby for irresponsible people.
Exotic animals are adapted to live in very uncommon places and they are dangerous to keep in your house beside your family and friends.

Secondly, it is very hard to create them a natural environment to live where they will be feel comfortable an can will be grow correctly.
A lot of people do not know all of informations about their exotic animals which they want to buy.
Most of people do not interest what is the best for their animals and they have a small knowledge in this field.
They do not have any informations about disases and other important subjects.
They regard exotic animals like toys.

To sum up, exotic animals are very hard to keep in normal conditions. You must be very responsible person if you want to take care about them. In my opinion all of them should be keep in ZOO and other special pleaces.

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which are keep
Most of people do not interest
a pets; a good conditions itp źle.

we must remember about dangerous nature ____ BRAK SŁOWA exotic animals.
The majority of them can easy kill us.
Exotic animals are NP SĄ ZMUSZONE DO adapted to live in very uncommon places..

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Nowadays we observe a lot of accidents with exotic animals which are kept in houses like pets.
It is not easy to create good conditions to live for them.

First of all, we must remember about dangerous nature of exotic animals. The majority of them can easily kill us. It is not hobby for irresponsible people.
Exotic animals are adapt to live in very uncommon places and they are dangerous to keep in your house beside your family and friends.

Secondly, it is very hard to create them a natural environment to live where they will be feel comfortable and can will be grow correctly.
A lot of people do not know all of informations about their exotic animals which they want to buy.
Most of people are not interesting what is the best for their animals and they have a small knowledge in this field.
They do not have any informations about diseases and other important subjects.
They regard exotic animals like toys.

To sum up, exotic animals are very hard to keep in normal conditions. You must be very responsible person if you want to take care about them. In my opinion all of them should be keep in ZOO and other special pleaces.

Nowadays we observe ZMIEN CZAS NA PRESENT CONTINUOUS, NOWADAYS TO NIE JEST ZAWSZE a lot of accidents with exotic animals which are kept in houses like pets.
It is not easy to create good conditions to live for them ZMIEN SZYK NA: FOR THEM TO LIVE.

First of all, we must remember about PRZEDIMEK dangerous nature of exotic animals. The majority of them can easily kill us. It is not PRZEDIMEK hobby for irresponsible people.
Exotic animals are adaptED to livING in very uncommon places and they are TOO dangerous to keep in your house beside your family and friends.

Secondly, it is very hard to create< -- ZŁE SŁOWO them a natural environment to live IN where they will be feel comfortable and can will be grow correctly.
A lot of people do not know all of PRZEDIMEK informations about their exotic animals which they want to buy.
Most of people are not interesting IN what is the best for their animals and they have a small knowledge in this field.
They do not have any informations <-- INFORMATION JEST NIEPOLICZALNE about diseases and other important subjects.
They regard exotic animals likeAS toys.

To sum up, exotic animals are very hard to keep in normal conditions. You must be very PRZEDIMEK responsible person if you want to take care about them. In my opinion all of them should be keep <--ZNOWU TEN SAM BŁAD CO NA POCZATKU in PRZEDIMEK ZOO and other special <-- ZŁE SŁOWO, TO ZNACZY WYJĄTKOWY places.

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