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Australian Simon Murie started a company SwimTrek. It offers exciting swimming holidays, on waters in different places around the world.
A real favourite are territory around the greek islands. Is possibility travelled in the islands swim with first for second. Specjal break company SwimTrek the swim 5km the Hellespont there where the mediterranean meets black sea and where Europe joins Asia .
Second the shorter swam from the prison island of Alcatraz across the bay to San Francisco.

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When an Australian calledSimon Murie realised that he wasn't the only the person who preferred swimming in open waters to swimming in the pool, he decided to start a companycalled SwimTrek. If offers exciting swimming holidays in lake, rivers and the sea in different places the world.
A real favourite is around the greek islands. What better way to travel from one island to the next than by walking off the beach into the water, swimming for a couple of hours,and then arriving on another beautiful beach on another beautiful island?

If you haven't got much time, you could choose one of their special breaks. Try the swim across the hellespont- the 5 km stretch of water near troy , where the Mediterraneam meets the Black sea and where europe joins Asia. Or do the shorter swim from the pirson island of Alcatraz across the bay to San Francisco, with views of the Golden Gate Bridge to your right and San Francisco's beautiful skyline in front of you.
A real favourite are (brak przedimka) 'territory' (tu musi byc l. mnoga, bo to odnosi sie do 'islands') around the 'greek' (duza litera) islands. 'Is possibility travelled in the islands swim with first for second' (tego zdania nawet nie rozumiem). (brak przedimka) 'specjal' (ortog) break (tu brakuje 2 slowa - ) company 'SwimTrek' (niepotr) (brakuje czasownika) the swim (brak slowa) 5km (brak slowa) the Hellespont 'there' (niepotr) where the 'mediterranean' (duza litera) meets (przedimek) 'black sea' (duza litera - dlaczego trzeba to przypominac?) and where Europe joins Asia .
Second 'the shorter swam' (tego calkowicie nie rozumiem) from the prison island of Alcatraz across the bay to San Francisco.

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