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Two months ago something surprising happened to me. I had won a running competition, in which my school used to fail for years. I didn't except the thing that occurred in my school the day after the competition.
My mum woke me up. I realised that I didn't hear the alarm. It was probably because of the effort in the competition the day before. I didn't feel like going to school, but my mum said 'Mrs Harris phoned a minute ago. I'll pick you up to school'.
When I get to school I thought that everybody were on the classes, because the corridor was nearly empty. Miss Courtney was the only visible person. She took me to the gym. I was in a small shock. The whole school was waiting for me there. I noticed a group of my friends. Ani winked to me. I didn't know what was happening. The head teacher asked me to come around, and then began his speech. He congratulated me for the last day, talked about the previous competitions which were uttery unsuccessful. Now because of my winning, the school received a big deal of money which had to be spent on sport promoting.
As a result I received a big envelope. Inside was a month long trip to Brazil! I was speechless. My friends were shouting and clapping. I think that some were jealous couse after I came around they just congratulated me and went home. We didn't have classes that day.

Two months ago something surprising happened to me. I had won a running competitionMOZE NAPISZ KIEDY, in which my school used to fail for years. I didn't except the thing that occurred <-- TO NIE ZDARZYLO WCZESNIEJ? in my school the day after the competition.
My mum woke me up. I realised that I didn't hear<-- NIE WCZESNIEJ? the alarm. It was probably because of the effort in the competition the day before. I didn't feel like going to school, but my mum said 'Mrs Harris phoned a minute ago. I'll pick you up to school PICK UP TO ZNACZY 'ODEBRAC''.
When I get ZLY CZAS to school I thought that everybody were <--ZLA GRAMATYKA on the classes, because the corridor was nearly empty. Miss Courtney was the only visible person. She took me to the gym. I was in a small shock. The whole school was waiting for me there. I noticed a group of my friends. Ani winked to me. I didn't know what was happening. The head teacher asked me to come around, and then began his speech. He congratulated me for the last day<-- CO TO ZNACZY?, talked about the previous competitions which were uttery unsuccessful. Now because of my winning, the school received a big GREAT deal of money which had to be spent on sport promoting.
As a result I received a big envelope. Inside BRAK SLOWA was a month long trip to Brazil! I was speechless. My friends were shouting and clapping. I think that some were jealous couse<-- NIE MA TAKIEGO SLOWA after I came around they just congratulated me and went home. We didn't have classes that day.