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Apple
Steve Jobs is the co-founder of Apple which is the world's second-largest information technology company by revenue after Samsung Electronics, and the world's third-largest mobile phone make
Jobs was studying in Portland at Reed College, but only one semester and later he entered to the computer club. Steve with his colleague from the computer club-Steve Wozniak founded Apple, which has become one of the most recognizable and valuable brand. Steve Jobs is an inspiration to many young people. His most important messages to the students are that they should continued to look for what really interest them, try to find a job which will give them the satisfaction, because in the work we spend a big part of our life so if we want to be happy, we have to feel that we work really well. We have to just love what we are doing. We should gain experience, learn, develop -this is the only way to eventually find what we really want to do in life. It's very important. Jobs encourage people to be optimistic and to take new challenges
Steve Jobs is a very famous person and he is an inspiration to many people, who want imitate him. His advice is very important to other people.
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Paragraf w którym jest mowa o "messages to the students" nieco pogmatwany;)
Steve Jobs już nie żyje. Ja bym zmienił jest, jest, jest itp na był, był, był itp.
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