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Today I would like to tell you about a Female Vocal Ensemble . It is a group of ten girls which share a passion for choral music. They are both students and graduates of our Academy. Female Vocal Ensemble was formed in October 2012 in a reply to need to make music together. Since October 2013 ensemble works at the faculty of conducting, jazz music and music education. Conductor is Anna Kowalska who graduated from the Academy with the degree of master of music in music education a few years ago. At present, she works as an assistant at the Academy.
The repertoire is mostly contemporary pieces but also compositions from earlier ages.
I`m a member of this group for a few weeks and I want to share with you my impressions. The team is very small which requires a very large vocal skills. It wasn`t a big problem for me because for three years I studied singing at the Academy. Much bigger problem was a combination of our different voices. Each of them has different timbre but when we singing together, we must sound like one. It takes a lot of attention and concentration. The work on the pieces is really fast even though they aren`t easy. They have a complicated harmony, rhythm. Often, they aren`t limited to four voices but are composed at six or seven. It makes that often vocal part is sung by only one person. It is very stressful, especially for competitions.
March 14 was the day when for the first time I performed with ensemble at the competition. I was upset not only by the fact that it was contest but that was our first performance together. The jury and the audience responded very enthusiastically to our show. As a result, we received the maximum number of points and we got a Grand Prix. We were very happy, especially in the competition involving more than thirty choirs and vocal ensembles.
In my opinion this is a phenomenon integrate the 10 women with different personalities. Sometimes it's really hard.
It is a great pleasure for me to be able to realize in this way and to share his passion for choral music.
Singing in this ensemble give a lot of joy and satisfaction, I think that not only to ourselves but also our audience performed music.

Today I would like to tell you about a<-RACZEJ THE, SKORO PO TYM JEST NAZWA WLASNA Female Vocal Ensemble . It is a group of ten girls which<-NIE O LUDZIACH share a passion for choral music. They are both students and graduates of our Academy. PRZEDIMEK Female Vocal Ensemble was formed in October 2012 in a reply to TUTAJ 'A' need to make music together. Since October 2013 ensemble works PRESENT PERFECT CONTINUOUS at the faculty of conducting<-NA PEWNO TAK SIE NAZYWA WYDZIAL?, jazz music and music education. PRZEDIMEK Conductor is Anna Kowalska PRZECINEK who graduated from the Academy with the degree BARDZO PO POLSKU. NAPISZ 'WHO OBTAINED A DEGREE ... FROM THE ACADEMY' of master of music in music education a few years ago. At present, she works as an assistant at the Academy.
The repertoire is mostly contemporary pieces but also compositions from earlier ages.
I`m ZLY CZAS a member of this group for a few weeks and I want to share with you<-TE DWA SLOWA NA KONCU my impressions. The team is very small PRZECINEK which requires a NIE PRZED LICZBA MNOGA very large vocal skills. It wasn`t a big problem for me because for three years I studied singing at the Academy. PRZEDIMEK Much bigger problem was a combination LEPSZY BEDZIE BEZOKOLICZNIK of our different voices. Each of them LEPIEJ 'US' has PRZEDIMEK different timbre but when we CZEGOS TU BRAK singing together, we must sound like one. It takes a lot of attention and concentration. The work on the pieces is really fast even though they aren`t easy. They have a complicated harmony ZAWSZE TAKA SAMA, CZY ROZNE?, rhythm. Often, they aren`t limited to four voices but are composed at<-ZLE SLOWO six or seven. It makes that <-NIE MA TAKIEJ KONSTRUKCJI W ANGIELSKIM often<-NIE W TYM MIEJSCU, PRZEDIMEK vocal part is sung by only one person. It is very stressful, especially for competitions = NA KONKURSY.
March 14 was the day when for the first time I performed with PRZEDIMEK ensemble at the KTÓREJ? competition. I was upset not only by the fact that it was PRZEDIMEK contest but that was our first performance together. The jury and the audience responded very enthusiastically to our show. As a result, we received the maximum number of points and we got a BYLO JEDNO DO ZDOBYCIA, PRAWDA? Grand Prix. We were very happy, especially in the A competition involving more than thirty choirs and vocal ensembles.
In my opinion this is a phenomenon NIE ROZUMIEM integrate the 10 women with different personalities. Sometimes it's really hard.
It is a great pleasure for me to be able to realize =ZDAC SOBIE SPRAWĘ in this way and to share his TO JEST Z TRANSLATORA? TO SORRY, NIE BEDE POPRAWIAL PO TRANSLATORZE passion for choral music.
Singing in this ensemble give a lot of joy and satisfaction, I think that not only to ourselves but also our audience performed music.[/quote]

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