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The topic of my presentation is 'Eastern European Culture And History of Drinking'. During my presentation I'm going to talk mostly about Poland, Czech Republic, Estonia, Latvia, Lithuania, Slovenia, Slovakia, Ukraine and Russia. Every single one of those countries has its own culture, but they all have a lot in common. Some parts of their culture are similar, they also share some history and attitude in drinking alcohol. Of course not all people in these countries think in the same way, though opinion of drinking in that part of world is rather common
A People were never just drinking, they were drinking until they were unconscious.Also in those days there was a law saying that peasents and other poor people were forced to buy alcohol from arisocracy and nobility, so they could earn more money. People were bound to buy alcohol, so they were buying and drinking it. Things got even more searious in the 19th century. It was like one big party that lasted for around one hundred years. There were inns and taverns everywhere and alcohol became very cheap because people found out how to make vodka from poteatos. Everyone was drinking, regardless of their sex, age or social status. People were saying, that if you are already drinking alcohol, you should do it everyday. Peasents weren't receiving money for their jobs, they were lcohol has been produced and drunk in Europe for thousands of years, usually made out of whatever materials were locally available. Most countries in Eastern Europe were too far to north to drink wine produced for example in Italy, so they drunk beer and mead made of honey. Mead was very expensive, strong and heady drink, drunk during weddings or different parties. Beer was very common liquor, drunk everyday to the dinner. The situation was like that for hundred of years, but things changed in the 16th century. People started considering beer as something tacky and mead was slowly being replaced by vodka, because it was cheaper to produce. People in Eastern Europe weren't drinking very much those days, but vodka was more much more available than mead, so things changed again. At the end of the 18th century Eastern Europe became famous for drinking alcohol. Alcoholic libations were very common, every social meeting and business deals were ending with alcohol.receiving vodka. Farmers, merchants, workers, artists and other people were refusing to work if they haven't gotten alcohol. Even if people were working, their work wasn't productive, because they were drunk. They were laying drunk on the streets in the middle of the day and that was something completly normal. People also used to believe, that vodka was the best medicine and they were even giving it to the little babies to calm them down.
Some people though, mostly priests from churches, were worried about the problem of alcoholism. They wanted to convince people to stop drinking so they were visiting inns and intimidating people that they will go to the hell. They were setting up groups at churches and that was something similar to what we call AA groups today. It was working sometimes, but only briefly. People were returnig to their old habits and drinking even more. Eastern Europe was the most addicted to alcohol part of the world.
Secound World War broke out and vodka still was something very important. War changed everyone's life and people were using alcohol in many ways. The most common reason of drinking was will to forget about everything what was going on. People were also drinking to cheer themselves up, to kill the time, or to make the integration easier. Almost everyone always had a bottle of vodka side by side. The war finally ended, but it didn't mean, that people stopped drinking. Life still was far from being problem-free. Even during the war, people didn't suffer because of the lack of alcohol.It was produced by great companies and illegally by people in their houses. There was a big crisis in the Eastern Europe after the war and very often vodka was the only thing that people could buy at the shops. Alcohol was taking its toll. In the 1980s only in Poland there were 3 millions addicted people.The polish government was finnaly trying to deal with the problem of alcohol abuse. The first thing they wanted to do was holding back people from making alcohol on their own. Poland was earning a lot from sale of the alcohol, but they wanted to extend incomes. They increased vodka prices and pioneered alcohol limit. People only could buy vodka if they had ration stamps. The government allowed for buying alcohol only from 1pm to 8pm. When 1pm was approaching people always were standing in a long line in order to buy it. It was the end of the 1990s when things finally changed. People put the breaks on vodka. They still drink it a lot, but now the most common drink is beer.
WKLEIŁAM ZŁY TEKST, TO TEN TUTAJ PROSZĘ O SPRAWDZENIE.

Alcohol has been produced and drunk in Europe for thousands of years, usually made out of whatever materials were locally available. Most countries in Eastern Europe were too far to north to drink wine produced for example in Italy, so they drunk beer and mead made of honey. Mead was very expensive, strong and heady drink, drunk during weddings or different parties. Beer was very common liquor, drunk everyday to the dinner. The situation was like that for hundred of years, but things changed in the 16th century. People started considering beer as something tacky and mead was slowly being replaced by vodka, because it was cheaper to produce. People in Eastern Europe weren't drinking very much those days, but vodka was more much more available than mead, so things changed again. At the end of the 18th century Eastern Europe became famous for drinking alcohol. Alcoholic libations were very common, every social meeting and business deals were ending with alcohol.receiving vodka. Farmers, merchants, workers, artists and other people were refusing to work if they haven't gotten alcohol. Even if people were working, their work wasn't productive, because they were drunk. They were laying drunk on the streets in the middle of the day and that was something completly normal. People also used to believe, that vodka was the best medicine and they were even giving it to the little babies to calm them down.
Some people though, mostly priests from churches, were worried about the problem of alcoholism. They wanted to convince people to stop drinking so they were visiting inns and intimidating people that they will go to the hell. They were setting up groups at churches and that was something similar to what we call AA groups today. It was working sometimes, but only briefly. People were returnig to their old habits and drinking even more. Eastern Europe was the most addicted to alcohol part of the world.
Secound World War broke out and vodka still was something very important. War changed everyone's life and people were using alcohol in many ways. The most common reason of drinking was will to forget about everything what was going on. People were also drinking to cheer themselves up, to kill the time, or to make the integration easier. Almost everyone always had a bottle of vodka side by side. The war finally ended, but it didn't mean, that people stopped drinking. Life still was far from being problem-free. Even during the war, people didn't suffer because of the lack of alcohol.It was produced by great companies and illegally by people in their houses. There was a big crisis in the Eastern Europe after the war and very often vodka was the only thing that people could buy at the shops. Alcohol was taking its toll. In the 1980s only in Poland there were 3 millions addicted people.The polish government was finnaly trying to deal with the problem of alcohol abuse. The first thing they wanted to do was holding back people from making alcohol on their own. Poland was earning a lot from sale of the alcohol, but they wanted to extend incomes. They increased vodka prices and pioneered alcohol limit. People only could buy vodka if they had ration stamps. The government allowed for buying alcohol only from 1pm to 8pm. When 1pm was approaching people always were standing in a long line in order to buy it. It was the end of the 1990s when things finally changed. People put the breaks on vodka. They still drink it a lot, but now the most common drink is beer.
zaznacz to, co sama napisalas. Przeklejonych fragmentow nie ma sensu sprawdzac, dlaczego mamy wysilac sie bardziej niz Ty?
Napisałam wszystko oprócz pierwszego zdania.
a wiesz, ze plagiat w Dżibuti jest karany śmiercią?
Po raz kolejny - napisałam wszystko, oprócz pierwszego zdania.
Alcohol has been produced and drunk in Europe for thousands of years (evidence? gdzie masz dowody na to? Przypuszczenie nie jest dowodem), usually made out of whatever materials were locally available. Most countries in Eastern Europe were too far to (brak przedimka) 'north' (wg mnie duza litera) to drink wine produced for example in Italy, so they 'drunk' (chyba drank) beer and mead made of honey (w ktorym wieku to bylo? 15? 20?). Mead was (przedimek) very expensive, strong and heady - drink, 'drunk' (chyba 'drank') during weddings or different parties. Beer was (przedimek) very common liquor, drunk everyday 'to the' (zle okreslenie, tutaj 'z') dinner. The situation was like that for hundredS of years, but things changed in the 16th century.
People in Eastern Europe 'weren't' (prosze w calosci) drinking very much (cos brtakuej) those days, but vodka was 'more much more' (cos tu nie tak, jest slowo 'readily' - sprawdz) available than mead, so things changed again.
Alcoholic libations were very common, every social meeting and business deals 'were ending' (zly czas - tutaj simple) 'with alcohol receiving vodka' (tego nie rozumiem). Farmers, merchants, workers, artists and other people were refusing to work if 'they haven't gotten' (poprosze w calosci - wiem, ze to AmE ale ja tego nie rozumiem) alcohol.
They were laying drunk on the streets in the middle of the day and that was something 'completly' (ortog) normal.
They wanted to convince people to stop drinking so they 'were visiting' (simple wystarczy, chociaz jestem swiadoma tego, ze w AmE jest inaczej) inns and intimidating people that they will go to the hell. They were setting up groups at churches and that was something similar to what we call (przedimek) AA groups today. 'It' (do czego to sie odnosi - jak daleko od 'groups'...napisz wyrazniej) was working sometimes, but only briefly. People were 'returnig' (ortog) (tutaj tez bym dala simple) to their old habits and WERE drinking even more. Eastern Europe (nie, to nie sama 'Europa' byla addicted, tylko 'ludzie z Europy...napisz wyrazniej) was the most addicted to alcohol part of the world.
(przedimek) 'Secound' (ortog) World War broke out and vodka 'still was' (zla kolejnosc slow) something very important.
The most common reason of drinking 'was will to' (cos tu nie tak) forget about everything 'what' (to jest kalka z polskiego slowa 'co' ale po ang piszemy 'that') was going on. People were also drinking to cheer themselves up, to kill the time, or to make the integration (z kim? czym? musisz wyjaznic - nie przypuszczaj ze wiemy) easier. Almost everyone always had a bottle of vodka 'side by side' (tutaj masz zle..chcialas powiedziec ' by their side'). The war finally ended, but it didn't mean(,) (nie rpozumiem po co tu jest przecinek) that people stopped drinking. Life 'still was' (zla kolej slow) far from being problem-free.
It was produced by great companies 'and illegally' (nie, bo tutaj wyglada tak, jakby te companies robili to illegally, co chciesz powiedziec to jest...companies as well as illegally) by people in their houses. There was a big crisis in 'the' (niepotr) Eastern Europe after the war and very often vodka was the only thing that people could buy at the shops. 'Alcohol' (nie sam alcohol, ale 'drinking alcohol') was taking its toll. In the 1980s only in Poland there were 3 'millions' (tutaj 'million') addicted people.The 'polish government' (duze litery - powinnas to sama wiedziec) was 'finnaly' (ortog) trying to deal with the problem of alcohol abuse. The first thing they wanted to do was 'holding' (tutaj 'hold') back people from 'making alcohol on their own' (nie, to nie tak, chodzi o 'making their own alcohol'). Poland was earning a lot from (przedimek) sale of 'the' (niepotr) alcohol, but they wanted to extend (cos brak) incomes. They increased vodka prices and pioneered (przedimek) alcohol limit. People 'only could' (zla kol slow - za duzo myslisz po polsku i dlatego caly czas to robisz) buy vodka if they had ration stamps. The government allowed 'for' (niepotr) buying alcohol only from 1pm to 8pm. When 1pm was approaching people 'always were' (zla kol slow) standing in a long line in order to buy it. It was (ja dodalabym tutaj AT) the end of the 1990s when things finally changed.

Co to jest z tymi przedimkami (a, an, the)...??? (Czarna magia?)
Bardzo dziękuję. Pewne rzeczy mogą nie mieć sensu, bo tekst mi się porozpadał przy kopiowaniu i jest źle wklejony, ale naprawdę bardzo dziękuje.
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