Autopresentation - sprawdzenie

My name is XXX.
I am a 1styear student at the Warsaw School of Economics.
My major is finance and accounting, my minor are business finance and project management.
I am particularly interested in banking sector.
So far I have done my internships at Deutsche Bank and Danone. The main takeaway from them is that I learned how to work under pressure and in the group. Moreover I learned how to use special programs which were very useful in work.
I have also gained professional experience while I was a volunteer during Euro 2012. I was working in accreditation center where I was responsible for checking all data and issuing accreditations to foreign guests and media.
My future dream job is to have my own restaurant or café but in the meantime I want to work in a corporation to earn some money for that restaurant. I am planning to go into marketing or internal control. My key professional goals are to become a manager in a corporation and later to be my own manager.
I have been an active member of AIESEC and Self-development students scientific association. I have organized many events but the biggest was “Miesiąc aktywnego rozwoju” which consisted of few lectures about self-development at different universities. I have enhanced my student experience by organizing time and working under stress.
On a more personal side I like reading books and watching tv shows.My hobbies include horse riding and snowboarding, of course in the winter.
I believe my main personal goals can become true oneday.

My name is XXX.
I am a 1styear student at the Warsaw School of Economics.
My major is finance and accounting, my minor LICZBA POJEDYNCZA are < -LICZBA MNOGA business finance and project management.
I am particularly interested in JEST TYLKO JEDEN TAKI SEKTOR banking sector.
So far I have done my COMPLETED internships at Deutsche Bank and Danone. The main takeaway WIEMY, ZE ABSOLWENCI SGH PRACUJA W MACDONALDSIE, ALE ZEBY JUZ PIERWSZY ROK NIE MIALZLUDZEN? NAPISZ 'MY MAIN GAIN' from them is that I learned how to work under pressure and in the group. Moreover I learned how to use special LEPIEJ 'DEDYKOWANYCH' programs A INNE SLOWO ZNASZ, TAKIE 'MIEKKIE'? which were JAK ZAMIENISZ PROGRAMY NA TO MIEKKIE SLOWO, ZMIEN ODPOWIEDNIO CZASOWNIK very useful in work.
I have SIMPLE PAST also gained professional experience while I was a volunteer during Euro 2012. I was working in PRZEDIMEK accreditation center where I was responsible for checking all data and issuing accreditations to foreign guests and media.
My future dream job is to have my own restaurant or café but in the meantime I want to work in a corporation to earn some money for that restaurant. I am planning to go into marketing or internal control< -CZY TO POPRAWNY TERMIN. My key professional goals are to become a manager in a corporation and later to be my own manager. MANAGE MY OWN BUSINESS
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I believe my main personal goals can become true oneday.PISOWNIA ROZLACZNA

The main takeaway --> to było stwierdzenie użyte przez moją lektorkę od angielskiego :P i dziękuje za pomoc :)

mnie to sie kojarzy jednoznacznie :-).
Gain na pewno bardziej pasuje stylistycznie do ogolnego tonu prezentacji.

CO? O czym tu mowa?

no wlasnie, takeaway w tym kontekscie to raczej 'take-home message', a nie umiejetnosci, ktore sie wynosi po szkoleniu itp.

aha, teraz rozumiem.
The main (thing that you) take away from today is....
A ja myslalam juz o Chinese albo Indian take-away.......:-)