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Kate is my cousin and moreover close friend since childhood. She is the same age as me - 22 years old. I always say that she looks like a typical model, because she is slim, neat and very pretty. What is more Kate is an owner of beautiful green eyes and shiny brown hair.

She is a positive and full of energy person, who makes people laugh. Whenever I have a problem she always comforts me and gives the best advice.

Kate is studying medicine at the Medical University of Lodz. She wanted to be a doctor since childhood. She is good and capable student. Kate has a very good memory and thanks to it she doesn’t need to spend a lot of time with books. I envy her that!

Kate is organized person and it makes that she has time for everything. She likes partying and going to clubs. Her great passion is dancing. Kate laughs that she will be very rich in the future, because she will be a respected gynecologist and well-known dance instructor.

Kate is incredibly helpful person, but unfortunately impatient and stubborn. In my opinion obstinacy is her the biggest drawback. If she decides something she must do it.

Despite our shortcomings we are still friends. And though we argue sometimes, I know she always supports me in difficult moments.
Kate is my cousin and moreover (brak przedimka) close friend (tutaj mozna dodac 'of mine') since childhood.
What is more Kate is 'an' (nie, tutaj masz zly przedimek, wiemy dokladnie o kogo chodzi) owner of beautiful green eyes and shiny brown hair.

She is (brak przedimka) good and capable student. Kate has a very good memory and 'thanks to it' (ja bym to dala inaczej...and because of that) she doesn’t need to spend a lot of time with books. I envy her that!

Kate is (brak przedimka) organized person and 'it' (nie wiadomo do czego to 'it' sie odnosi, zdanie jest niezreczne...lepiej napisac 'this') 'makes that she has' (troche nioe tak, lepiej...results in her having) time for everything.
Kate is (brak przedimka) incredibly helpful person, but unfortunately (she is) impatient and stubborn. In my opinion obstinacy is her 'the' (niepotr slowo, mozna napisac...is in her the biggest) biggest drawback. If she decides something she 'must' (mozna tez uzyc 'has to') do it.
daj w 1 zdaniu 'has been', bo byla i wciaz jest
Np,
If she decides TO DO something...
Cytat: Aaric
Np,
If she decides TO DO something...

mozna tez ON...she decides on something

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