pamiętnik + krótki opis serialu/aktorów

Bardzo bym prosiła o sprawdzenie. Nie chodzi o jakąś zaawansowaną gramatykę, tylko taką podstawową, żeby to było zrozumiałe i słówka. Z góry dziękuję. :)

16.08.2015, Sunday
Today I start to write my diary. It isn’t very personal or secretly diary I just want to improve my English. I heard it is good idea. I don’t know but I think worth a try. Maybe it improve my writing skills. I talk with my sisters in English to improve speaking skills and I listen to English songs. I even started watching American series without lector or subtitles. I don’t understand everything yet but I hope I will see results soon. Who knows? I always hated English and I had terrible teachers in school. I recently changed my mind. I want to watching interviews with my favourite actors and I want understand what they say. And I think that English will be useful in the future. That’s why I want to know this language.
I said about my favourite actors. There are Darren Criss and Chris Colfer. They both played in Glee. It’s musical so they are actors but musicians too. They have amazing voices despite they are completely different. They are lovers in show but in real life Chris is gay and has other boyfriend and Darren is straight and has other girlfriend. Chris sing like a girl but it’s good because it makes his voice more unusual. And when they sing together they sounds very well. This series may seems little weird but it shows very important things. Tolerance and being yourself. I think it’s beautiful. And this show includes a lot of amazing songs and I think everyone can find something for himself. I regret this series is over.

16.08.2015, Sunday < -DATY PO ANGIELSKU SIE INACZEJ PISZE
Today I start< -- ZLY CZAS, JESTES W CHWILI ROZPOCZECIA, WIEC UZYJ PRESENT CONTINUOUS to write my diary. It isn’t PRZEDIMEK very personal or secretly diary I just want to improve my English. I heard it is PRZEDIMEK good idea < -CZYTAJACY MOZE NIE WIEDZIEC, DO CZEGO TO ZDANIE SIE ODNOSI. I don’t know but I think BRAK TUTAJ CZEGOS, TRANSLATOR? worth a try. Maybe it WILL improve (POPRAWI) my writing skills. I talk with my sisters in English to improve speaking skills and I listen to English songs. I even started watching American series without lector or subtitles. I don’t understand everything yet but I hope I will see results soon. Who knows? I always hated English and I had terrible teachers in school. I recently changed my mind. I want to watching interviews with my favourite actors and I want understand what they say. And I think that English will be useful in the future. That’s why I want to know this language.
I said about my favourite actors. There are LEPIEJ: THESE ARE Darren Criss and Chris Colfer. They both played in Glee. It’s PRZEDIMEK musical so they are actors but musicians too. They have amazing voices despite they are completely different. They are lovers in PRZEDIMEK show but in real life Chris is gay and has ANother boyfriend and Darren is straight and has ANother girlfriend. Chris sing< --NIEGRAMATYCZNE (O JEDNA LITERKE ZA MALO) like a girl but it’s good because it makes his voice more unusual. And when they sing together they sound < --NIEGRAMATYCZNE (O JEDNA LITERKE ZA DUZO) very well. This series may seems< --NIEGRAMATYCZNE little weird but it shows very important things. Tolerance and being yourself. I think it’s beautiful. And this show includes a lot of amazing songs and I think everyone can find something for himself. I regret this series is over.

It isn’t (brak przedimka) very personal or 'secretly' (zla czesc mowy) diary (tutaj cos potrzeba, np. przecinek) I just want to improve my English. I heard THAT it is (brak przedimka) good idea. I don’t know but I think (tu brak 2 slowa - po ang. 'to jest') worth a try. Maybe it (tutaj potrzeba modala) improve my writing skills.
I even started watching American series without (daj tutaj przedimek) lector or subtitles. I don’t understand everything yet (zawsze dawaj przecinek przed slowem 'but') but I hope I will see (tutaj potrzeba slowa) results soon.
I want to 'watching' (tutaj wystarczy simple) interviews with my favourite actors and I want TO understand what they say.
I 'said' (nie, zrob to inaczej...I have already said) about my favourite actors. 'There' (zle slowo, tutaj THESE) are Darren Criss and Chris Colfer.
It’s (brak przedimka) musical so they are actors 'but' (tutaj daj 'and') musicians too. They have amazing voices despite (tutaj musisz dodac...the fact THAT) they are completely different. They are lovers in (przedimek) show (przecinek) but in real life Chris is gay and has 'ANother' (chociaz wg mnnie wystarczy 'a') boyfriend and Darren is straight and has ANother girlfriend. Chris singS (tu 3os.l.poj - Chris-he) like a girl but it’s good because it makes his voice more unusual.
This series may 'seems' (nie, tutaj slowo 'seem' dlatego, ze uzylas modala, bez modala 'may' mozesz uzyc 'seems') (przedimek) little weird (przecinek) but it shows very important things.
'And' (nie za bardzo lubie gdy zdania zaczynaja sie slowem 'and' - to za bardzo przypomina jezyk mowy a nie jezyk pisemny - uzyj inne slowo) this show includes a lot of amazing songs and I think everyone can find something for 'himself' (a herself? czy kobiety sa 'excluded' z tego, lepiej uzyj slowo 'themselves'). I regret THAT this series is over.

16.08.2015, Sunday < -DATY PO ANGIELSKU SIE INACZEJ PISZE
...data jest napisana prawidloweo wg BrE - 16th of August, 2015. Wiem, ze w AmE sie pisze inaczej, ale twierdzenie, ze data jest 'zle' jest nie na miejscu, jak to jest dobrze napisane wg mnie.

16th of August, 2015 - no wlasnie myslalem, ze ma tak byc

Ja też bym dał przedimki przed boyfriend i girlfriend zamiast other/another

Często widzę w brytyjskich gazetach internetowych format: August 9, 2015. Rzadziej widzę 9th, ale też występuje.