I don't like being sick.When I'm sick everything around me seems to be awful and hopeless.It makes me feel very tired and I don't want to do anything. I don't like being sick because then I can't focus on the basic activities: I'm not strong enough to even tidy my room or do my homework. I'm sleepy and exhausted all the time, moreover I look like a monster with a red running nose. Being sick means taking a lot of pills and drinking horrible sirup every day, I hate it. The worst thing of being sick is for me disability to say or eat anything because of hurting throat.
I don't want to do anything- mozesz tez napisac: I can't be bothered to do anything.
I'm not strong enough- I'm too weak
The worst thing of being sick is for me disability to say or eat anything because of hurting throat. - napisalabym: I think that the worst part about being sick is having difficulty speaking and swallowing caused by a sore/irritated throat.
having difficulty...caused... to nie ten styl, ktorego tu trzeba
anscot
12 paź 2015
To moze zostac because of :), ''disability to say'' razilo po oczach, mozna uzyc tez inability to speak ale w sumie tez jest dosc formalne i tak naprawde w czasie choroby mamy tylko jakies czesciowe problemy z mowieniem i jedzeniem niz calkowita ''niezdolnosc''. Probowalam pokombinowac z problems, trouble ale jakos nie wychodzi mi spojne zdanie.
Czepiajac sie zbyt formalnego stylu ''moreover'' tez powinno byc zastapione np ''plus''