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Today we live very fast, we worker to much, and oft we forget about most important thinks in our live so keep work-life balance are very hard. In last year increasingly people have social problems with workaholism and burnout. In this essay, I am going to argue that harmony between work and life are possible but often we forgotten about a few most important rules. I would like provide some tips which will help keep work-life balance in live.
First and foremost we should schedule whole week. We will write all mantles, meetings so that whole day a couple minutes for relax. When we have this list we will feel less stress, because don’t forget about a something important.
Moreover we should thinking about little treat which give a kick. Short jogging, favorite serial, books, games, relaxing bath. This little treat make that we forgot about problems, stress, duty’s and feels relaxing.
Thidly the best for keep work-life balance are holidays. When we are going to holidays. New place, people, this will allow us forget about our problems and regenerate new power.
We should spend whole free time with family and good friends. When we keep good relationship with our kindred we can always talking about our problems and worry. Sometimes joint film’s night with family, or go for a beer will be the best way for relaxing.
In conclusion it seems that harmony between work and life are possible but we must everytime thiking we must remember that it does not just work lives.

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First and foremost we should schedule THE whole week. We will DLACZEGO CZAS PRZYSZLY write all mantles CO?, meetings so that whole day BRAK PODMIOTU I ORZECZENIA a couple minutes for relax TO JEST CZASOWNIK, TU MA BYC ALBO GERUND ALBO RZECZOWNIK. When we have this list we will feel less stress, because don’t forget NIE ZAPOMINAJ about a something PRZED SOMETHING NIE UZYWA SIE 'A' important.
Moreover we should thinking ZLA FORMA CZASOWNIKA about PRZEDIMEK little treat which give ZLA FORMA CZASOWNIKA, POZA TYM: KOMU a kick. Short NIE, NAPISZ 'TROCHE' jogging, favorite serial, books, games, relaxing bath TO NIE JEST ZDANIE. This little treat make ZLA FORMA CZASOWNIKA that PO MAKE NIE UZYWA SIE ZDAŃ we forgot about problems, stress, duty’s and feels relaxing. RELAKSUJACY
Thidly ORTOGR the best for keep ZLA FORMA CZASOWNIKA work-life balance are holidays. When we are going to holidays ZLE WYRAZENIE, SPRAWDZ W SLOWNIKU, POZA TYM TO NIE MOZE BYC KONIEC ZDANIA. New place, people, this ZA DUZO PODMIOTOW will allow us BRAK SLOWA forget about our problems and regenerate new power. NOWEJ NIE MOZNA ZREGENEROWAC
We should spend whole OUR free time with NASZĄ family and good friends. When we keep good relationship with our kindred LOVED ONES we can always talking ZLA FORMA CZASOWNIKA about our problems and worry = I MARTWIC SIĘ. Sometimes joint film’s night NIE: NAPISZ 'OGLADANIE FILMU RAZEM' with family, or go TU MA BYC GERUND for a beer will be the best way for relaxing.
In conclusion it seems that harmony between work and life are ZNOWU possible but we must everytime NAPISZ 'ZAWSZE' thiking ZLA FORMA CZASOWNIKA we must remember that it does not just work lives NIEZROZUMIALA KONCOWKA

MARNE, WIELE BLEDOW MOGLAS UNIKNAC