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PASSION AND DEDICATION

It is sunny day and there are a lot of teenagers on the sports ground. A few of them are running on the track or jumping into the sand. The rest of them are warming up near the sports field.

The trainer, Rafał, watches them closely. He is a well-build 40-year-old man with specific hairstyle. As a child he trained track and field. He was the best in hurdles. But his second love was handball. During a handball game Rafał had a terrible injury. After that he had a special knee surgery and had to end up with sport. So he became a PE teacher and set up sports club.

"Mr. Rafał is a wonderful coach. He is caring and forgiving, but also very demanding." explains Filip, who has two gold medals Polish Championships in triple jump and one in long jump, "I can talk with him about everything." His friend Damian adds: "The trainer has also a great sense of humour, so we have a lot of fun on trainings."

But this job is not so easy. Rafał devotes a lot of time to prepare suitable trainings for his contestants and spends hours on the sports field. Thanks to him many people achieved success. He is looked up by a lot of people and some boys would like to be like he.

What are Rafał's plans? He said that he would help people to develop their abilities until he would be healthy and strong enough.

sprawdź definicję 'end up'
imo, nie ma słowa 'trainings'

It is (brak przedimka) sunny day and there are a lot of teenagers on the sports ground. A few of them are running on the track or 'jumping into the sand' (chyba jest jakas fachowa nazwa na to).

He is a well-build 40-year-old man with (brak przedimka) specific hairstyle. As a child he 'trained track' (cos mi tu brakuje) and field. He was the best in (tutaj chyba brakuje jakis distance) hurdles.
(tutaj mozna dodac slowo However,) during a handball game Rafał had a terrible injury. After that he had a 'special' (nie tutaj trzeba wiecej dokladniej) knee surgery and had to 'end up' (zle pojecie) with sport. So he became a PE teacher and set up (brak przedimka) sports club.

"Mr. Rafał is a wonderful coach. He is caring and forgiving, but also very demanding." explains Filip, who has two gold medals Polish Championships in (przedimek) triple jump and one in (przedimek) long jump, "I can talk with him about everything." His friend Damian adds: "The trainer has also a great sense of humour, so we have a lot of fun on 'trainings' (to slowo nie istnieje w jez. ang - )."

Rafał devotes a lot of time to prepare suitable 'trainings' (popraw) for his contestants and spends hours on the sports field. Thanks to him many people (brak cos, zly czas, tutaj HAVE) achieved success. He is looked up TO) by a lot of people and some boys would like to be like he IS.(mozna tez napisac...would like to be him)

He said that he would help people to develop their abilities until he 'would be' (tutaj masz za bardzo po polsku, wystarczy IS) healthy and strong enough.

dziekuje bardzo

well-built
po angielsku nie mowi sie 'pan rafal' itp.

He said that he would help people to develop their abilities until he 'would be' (tutaj masz za bardzo po polsku, wystarczy IS) healthy and strong enough. coś nie tak z tym zdaniem. Dlaczego wszędzie jest present simple a tu dałaś past.
ludzie = 'oni' a nie 'on'