Sprawdzenie streszczenia pracy licencjackiej

Cześć! Piszę pracę na temat Roli kuratora sądowego w procesie resocjalizacji. Mam problem ze streszczeniem pracy w języku angielskim. Czy mógłby ktoś mi to sprawdzić? Z góry dzięki! :)

Bachelor's thesis entitled "The role of probation officer in rehabilitation process" presents informations about probation officer's work and his role in a rehabilitation process. Thesis consist with three chapters. First chapter contains elementary and theoretical issues about this profession. This chapter also presents a history of this profession and previous explorations about the role of probation officer. Second chapter shows purpose and the subjects of a study. Researcher puts hypothesis which are necessary in analysis this issue. Important aspect of study is also presentation characteristic of area and population. Third and last chapter starts with eleborated results of research helped with analysis files and interviews. Results of the research will answer the questions posed by the researcher. The whole closes the end, a summary in English, bibliography and appendices.

'Bachelor's' (nie potrzebne slowo , lepiej 'This') thesis entitled "The role of probation officer in (brak przedimka) rehabilitation process" presents 'informations' (hello? gdzie to slowo znalazles, bo ono nie istnieje w jez. ang) about (brak przedimka) probation officer's work and his role in 'a' (zly przedimek) rehabilitation process. (brak przedximka) thesis consist 'with' (calkowicie zle slowo, tutaj podpowiem 'of') three chapters. (brak przedimka) first chapter contains elementary and theoretical issues about 'this profession' (niezgrabne, jak kobieta z krzywymi nogami...probation officer's profession'). 'This chapter' (wystarczy It) also presents a history of this profession and previous explorations 'about the role' (niepotrzebne) of (tu brak 2 slowa) probation officer. (brak przedimka) second chapter shows (przedimek) purpose and the subjects of a study. (przedimek) researcher puts (tutaj brakuje 'forward') hypothesis which are necessary in 'analysis' (zla czesc mowy, tutaj 'analysing') this issue. (przedimek) important aspect of (cos brak) is also (przedimek) presentation (brak slowa) characteristic of area and population. (przedimek) third and last chapter 'starts' (nie, lepiej 'begins') with (cos brak) eleborated results of (przedimek) research helped 'with' (zle slowo, tutaj BY) analysis files and interviews. (przedimek) results of the research 'will answer the questions posed' (cos mi tu nie pasuje, jakos nie rozumiem o co chodzi) by the researcher. The 'whole closes' (tego calkowicie nie rozumiem) the end, a summary in English, bibliography and appendices.

'Bachelor's' (nie potrzebne slowo , lepiej 'This') thesis entitled "The role of probation officer in (brak przedimka) rehabilitation process" presents 'informations' (hello? gdzie to slowo znalazles, bo ono nie istnieje w jez. ang) about (brak przedimka) probation officer's work and his role in 'a' (zly przedimek) rehabilitation process. (brak przedximka) thesis consist 'with' (calkowicie zle slowo, tutaj podpowiem 'of') three chapters. (brak przedimka) first chapter contains elementary and theoretical issues about 'this profession' (niezgrabne, jak kobieta z krzywymi nogami...probation officer's profession'). 'This chapter' (wystarczy It) also presents a history of this profession and previous explorations 'about the role' (niepotrzebne) of (tu brak 2 slowa) probation officer. (brak przedimka) second chapter shows (przedimek) purpose and the subjects of a study. (przedimek) researcher puts (tutaj brakuje 'forward') hypothesis which are necessary in 'analysis' (zla czesc mowy, tutaj 'analysing') this issue. (przedimek) important aspect of (cos brak) is also (przedimek) presentation (brak slowa) characteristic of area and population. (przedimek) third and last chapter 'starts' (nie, lepiej 'begins') with (cos brak) eleborated results of (przedimek) research helped 'with' (zle slowo, tutaj BY) analysis files and interviews. (przedimek) results of the research 'will answer the questions posed' (cos mi tu nie pasuje, jakos nie rozumiem o co chodzi) by the researcher. The 'whole closes' (tego calkowicie nie rozumiem) the end, a summary in English, bibliography and appendices.

'Bachelor's' (nie potrzebne slowo , lepiej 'This') thesis entitled "The role of probation officer in (brak przedimka) rehabilitation process" presents 'informations' (hello? gdzie to slowo znalazles, bo ono nie istnieje w jez. ang) about (brak przedimka) probation officer's work and his role in 'a' (zly przedimek) rehabilitation process. (brak przedximka) thesis consist 'with' (calkowicie zle slowo, tutaj podpowiem 'of') three chapters. (brak przedimka) first chapter contains elementary and theoretical issues about 'this profession' (niezgrabne, jak kobieta z krzywymi nogami...probation officer's profession'). 'This chapter' (wystarczy It) also presents a history of this profession and previous explorations 'about the role' (niepotrzebne) of (tu brak 2 slowa) probation officer. (brak przedimka) second chapter shows (przedimek) purpose and the subjects of a study. (przedimek) researcher puts (tutaj brakuje 'forward') hypothesis which are necessary in 'analysis' (zla czesc mowy, tutaj 'analysing') this issue. (przedimek) important aspect of (cos brak) is also (przedimek) presentation (brak slowa) characteristic of area and population. (przedimek) third and last chapter 'starts' (nie, lepiej 'begins') with (cos brak) eleborated results of (przedimek) research helped 'with' (zle slowo, tutaj BY) analysis files and interviews. (przedimek) results of the research 'will answer the questions posed' (cos mi tu nie pasuje, jakos nie rozumiem o co chodzi) by the researcher. The 'whole closes' (tego calkowicie nie rozumiem) the end, a summary in English, bibliography and appendices.

Sorry, nie wiem co sie stalo ze to 3 razy sie wydrukowalo. Przepraszam

@terri Mógłbyś sprawdzić czy dobrze poprawiłam?
This thesis entitled The role of probation officer in the rehabilitation process presents information about the probation officer’s work and his role in the rehabilitation process. The thesis consist of three chapters. A first chapter contains elementary and theoretical issues about probation officer’s profession. It also presents a history of this profession and previous explorations of this branch. A second chapter shows a purpose and the subjects of study. A researcher puts forward hypothesis wchich are necessary in analysing this issue. The important aspect of study i also the presentation about characteristic of area and population. A third and last chapter begins with a eleborated results of the research by analysis files and interviews. The results of the research will answer the questions posed by the researcher(wyniki badań pozwolą odpowiedzieć na pytania postawione przez badacza). The whole closes (chodziło mi o to, że ‘całość zamyka’) the end, a summary in English, bibliography and appendices.

This thesis entitled (tutaj trzeba dac ' ...The role of probation officer in the rehabilitation process' presents information about the probation officer’s work and his role in the rehabilitation process.
'A ' (napisalam ze jest potrzebny przedimek, to dlaczego wklejasz ten ktory jest bledny?) first chapter contains 'elementary' (nie lubie tego slowa tutaj i ono jest bledne - poszukaj inne) and theoretical issues about (brak przedimka) probation officer’s profession.
'A' (nie wiem dlaczego piszesz 'a' jak jest wiadomo ze to chodzi o konkretny chapter - popraw) second chapter shows 'a' (zly przedimek) purpose and the subjects of (brak przedimka) study. 'A' (jakis tam nieznany nam - zly przedimek) researcher puts forward hypothesis 'wchich' (ortog) are necessary in analysing this issue. 'The' (zly przedimek) important aspect of (brak slowa) study 'i' (co to?) also the presentation about characteristic of area and population. 'A' (zly przedimek) third and last chapter begins with a eleborated results of the research by analysis files and interviews. The results of the research 'will' (niepotrzebny modal) answer the questions posed by the researcher(wyniki badań pozwolą odpowiedzieć na pytania postawione przez badacza). (no i po co dahesz mi to po polsku, jak tu chodzi zeby zdanie w jez. ang mialo sense.)l The whole (tutaj brakuje czego 'thesis') 'closes the end' (tego nawet nie rozumiem), (tutaj trzeba inaczej...closes BY...) a summary in English, bibliography and appendices.

@terri Wiem, jestem opornym uczniem ;) Dzięki za pomoc!