Proszę o sprawdzenie poniższego tekstu o moim ulubionym filmie

My favourite film is Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone. This movie is based on one of the books written by J.K. Rowling . Daniel Radcliffe has played the main role- a young boy who is a wizard. This movie is a story of Harry Potter and his two friends : Hermiona Granger and Ron Weasley who with the help of magic save the world from evil. They study in School of witchcraft and Wizardry called Hogwart. At the end of the school year heroes fight with bad Voldemort for sorcerer's stone. I really like it because there is everything in it. It has a lot of special effects. The action is quick and the film is sometimes funny but also touching.

has played - zły czas
who with the help of magic save the world from evil - wstaw odpowiednie przecinki w tym fragmencie
przedimki przed school, heroes, stone
kto to jest 'bad Voldemort'? to ktos inny niz Voldemort?