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I like healthy and unhealthy food, but I prefer healthy dish, because it is nutrient. I really love milk chocolate.
I eat everything, who have chocolate, but I try to stop eat sweets. For example my yesterday's dinner consist
of olives, tomatoes, cucumbers and cottage cheese with glass of mineral water with a slice of lemon. This
connection tasted delicious. Instead I cannot imagine, how people can eat snails! These small, slime animals
are hideous. Or how people like cucumber cola? It is horrible! My dad very much like grapefruit. I disagree
with he, because for me this fruit is too bitter.
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Aha, dzięki za pomoc. Czy tak jest lepiej? :

I like both healthy and unhealthy food, but I prefer healthy dishes, because it is nutrient. I really love milk chocolate.
I eat everything, what have chocolate, but I try to stop eat sweets. For example my yesterday's dinner consisted
of olives, tomatoes, cucumbers and cottage cheese with a glass of mineral water with a slice of lemon. This
combination tasted delicious. Instead I cannot imagine, how people can eat snails! These small, slimy animals
are hideous. Or how people like cucumber- flavoured cola? It is horrible! My dad like grapefruits very much. I disagree
with him, because for me this fruit is too bitter.
Posłuż się wskazowkami i popraw sama.
Np 'nutrient' jest rzeczownikiem a potrzebujesz przymiotnika. Również nie będzie 'it is' bo dishes = l.mn
'I eat everything, what have chocolate,'
'but I try to stop eat sweets.' ja by dał inny czas
Instead NIE PASUJE DO KONTEKSTU I cannot imagine,
Or how people like cucumber- flavoured cola?
My dad like grapefruits very much.
dobra, dzięki za pomoc i wskazówki :)
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