Prosze o sprawdzenie

1. - The best jobs for teenagers is distributing leaflets and working at a McDonalds. These jobs are best because don't require qualifications. In these jobs employers want a hire a young people and teenaers can put hours of work and school.
- I never like to work as a pilot. This jobs is tiring. The flights sometimes take 8 hours and I couldn't sit in one place. Secondly I have a fear of heights.
- Parents shouldn't pay their children for doing housework because children should learn discipline and they help their parents. Another reward for help is spending time together.
-I would like to have my own company because I could decide everything. I could hire people which I would like to work. I would like to have in my own company because then I would be my own boss.
2. I decided to take on a job in a restaurant. In the last summer I picked fruits. It was a very tiring job, also I worked as a babysitter. I babysit the daughter of a neighbor.
I take on a job because I want to earn some money on my expenses. I have to pay bills for the apartment. I want to earn money to spent on my own car. The students can work in a restaurant. The popular jobs is providing tutoring and distributing leaflets. These jobs don't require experiens and they can work in the afternoon. The employers want to hire people who have an previous experience. When I will find work I have to get up early. It is a big callange for me.

1. - These jobs are best because (tutaj brak 'one') don't require qualifications. In these jobs employers want 'a' (zle slowo) hire 'a' (nie dajemy przedimkow przed l. mn) young people and 'teenaers' (popraw) can put hours 'of' (zle slowo) work and school.
- I (tutaj potrzeba modala 'would') never like to work as a pilot. This 'jobs' (tutaj l. poj) is tiring.
- Parents shouldn't pay their children for doing housework because children should learn discipline and they (daj tutaj modala) help their parents.
-I could hire people 'which' (jak o ludziach to 'whom') I would like to work (dodaj 'for me'). I would like to have 'in' (niepotr) my own company because then I would be my own boss.
2. 'In the' (wg mnie niepotr) Last summer I picked 'fruits' (wystarczy 'fruit').
I 'babysit' (babysat) the daughter of a neighbor.
I take on a job because I want to earn some money 'on' (zle slowo, tutaj 'for') my expenses. The popular jobs 'is' (jobs to l. mnoga wymaga czasoiwnika l. mnogiej) providing tutoring and distributing leaflets. These jobs don't require 'experiens' (popraw) and they can work in the afternoon. The employers want to hire people who have 'an' (niepotr) previous experience.
It is a big 'callange' (popraw) for me.