Hejka,
Ostatnio napisałem tekst piosenki po angielsku, ale nie czy wszystko jest w nim poprawne. Proszę o poinformowanie mnie o ewentualnych błędach, abym mógł je jakoś skorygować. Proszę o pomoc. Oto tekst:
''Song for her''
1st This girl suttendly arrived from somewhere
and riveted my anttention
I desired to meet her from monday to sunday
It was tiring situation
I decided to confess my hidden feelings
I wrote the lyrics n' I started to sing it
Chorus
She thought that I just gonna be a friend
I created love song especially for her
When I performed it, she took my hand
I threw my diffidence away
Now I'm takin' delight in watching her beauty
I didn't dare ealier, that's why I was stupid
We're hummin' the song n' she's holdin' my hand
I threw my diffidence so far away
2nd This girl gladdens like a glorious miracle
She's my sole inspiration
We'll easily beat the horrible obstacles
We've got lot of determination
So I don't regret my gambling decison
I couldn't to send my love to oblivion
Chorus
She thought that I just gonna be a friend
I created love song especially for her
When I performed it, she took my hand
I threw my diffidence away
Now I'm takin' delight in watching her beauty
I didn't dare ealier, that's why I was stupid
We're hummin' the song n' she's holdin' my hand
I threw my diffidence so far away