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The newest researches show that more and more children and youth are deciding to start their music or acting career. What are the benefits and drawbacks of such a step?

There is no denying that there are plenty of superb reasons for such an idea. First of all, you develop your skills from the very beginning. Devoting your time for various and numerous preparations gives a result – you can achieve perfection and become a world-famous singer or an actor. Secondly, it makes you responsible and resonable person. As you do for a living, you have a respect for your hard-earned money.

Nevertheless, there are also drawbacks of such a solution. Firstly, you lose touch with your peers. Long, daily rehearsals can make you feel exhausted and you will not be able to hang out with your acquaintances. What is more, you may fall behind in school. Due to you overfull schedule you do not have time to prepare for the lessons or even attend them.

In conclusion, there are both pros and cons of starting a career in a young age. Taking into consideration all the aforementioned arguments, I am inclined to agree with the opponents more. However,everybody should make their own choice depending on their abilities and preferences.
First of all, you develop your skills from the very beginning (cos to zdanie nie daje mi spokoju...beginning of what?) . Devoting your time for 'various and numerous' (po co 2 slowa?) preparations gives 'a result' (wg mnie wystarczy 'results') – you can achieve perfection and become a world-famous singer or an actor. Secondly, it makes you (przedimek) responsible and 'resonable' (ortog) person. 'As you do for a living'
(tego nie rozumiem), you have 'a' (niepotr) respect for your hard-earned money.

Long, daily rehearsals can make you feel exhausted and you will not be able to hang out with your 'acquaintances' (slowo nie za bardzo w tym samym register, acquaitances to sa ludzie ktorych widzisz raz na rok zeby im powiedziec 'dzien dobry'). What is more, you may fall behind (tutaj mi brakuje z czym?) in school.
In conclusion, there are both pros and cons of starting a career 'in' AT a young age.
However, everybody should make their own 'choice' (jak dajesz 'everybody' to musi byc choices', daj 'everyone' i wtedy moze byc 'choice) depending on their abilities and preferences.
Chciałam dać, że no od samego początku
No to moze nie do for a living a make money tylko wtedy mam 2x money
Fall behind in school wdlg mogego slownika oznacza narobic sobie zaleglowsi w szkole
>>>... do for a living a make money ...to jest calkowicie zle. As you make a living, you have respect...
As you work for a living, you...
>>>>Fall behind in school 'wdlg mogego slownika oznacza narobic sobie zaleglowsi w szkole'
Nie irituj mmniei, co tam jakis 'slownik' pisze....you may fall behind with your work ..at school
edytowany przez terri: 02 mar 2017

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