Most
of (bez)people hav
ing (bezokolicznik)fun
in the(on) New Year's Eve. It is a day when most
of(bez) cities organise parties
on(in)
a(przedimek określony) fresh air.
Society (ludzie)can enjoy themselves during this night by listening
for instant(bez) (listen łączy się z innym przimkiem) concert(s) and
also(bez) spending (ich) time
on(jak w pierwszej linijce) the (świeżym?) air (albo napisz na zewnatrz zeby nie powtarzać).
It has some advantages and disadvantages.(bez)
These parties generate
large(głośny) noise. It can be
disagreeable (inny przymiotnik )for elderly people who would like to spend (ich) time in their houses
and avoid (away from) noise. They also want to
have peace and they(bez) go to bed earlier than other
s group(s) of society. In Europe there
is (liczba mnoga) a lot of pensioners and
it (trzeba wyjaśnic co to jes tto "it"can be problematic for them.
However, this problem
exist(present simple) only (on) one day in a whole year. (That)Notwithstanding, some
of (bez) pensioners have bad attidute
against(inny przyimek "w kierunku) this type of
celebrating (rzeczownik byłby lepszy)but it is (a)
little(normalnie "mały)
amount.(pensioners sa policzlni potrzebujesz słowa "liczba")
To be honest, it is better to spend time
on the fresh air with friends or workmate(s) than in a house.
Human needs dealing with people and (ludzie potrzebują) having fun with
others(one another). It is
the truth (przymiotnik, znajdz wyrazenie "bez zwątpienia) that is a big expenditure for
a large cities but authorities should sponsor these events. In my opinion, it is
necessarily(przymiotnik) to invite singers for
society(koncerty?). It is
the (bez) only one day. (so) It could not be (a) large expenditure especially
to(dla) big cities which want
s to
be advertise
d.(ich ofertę?) These types of events are
streamed (inne słowo)
in(inny przyimek)
a(bez) television
so the(bez) city(ies) has advertise.[/b]
(bez)It is (a) good (rozwiązanie)
to(dla) people who prefer spending
new year's eve (duża) in the house on the sofa.
To sum up,
in this subject (bez)there are more advantages than disadvantages (...dokończyc). It is worth to organise (a) fresh- air party in this special night even if it
is can be expensive. Also
dealing with (integrowanie się?) people is really important
in current times.(these days)