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Tu artykuł źródłowy: http://www.nature.com/news/snapshots-explore-einstein-s-unusual-brain-1.11836
A tu moje wypociny. Wyszło mi 197 słów, czyli tak z jedna trzecia tak jak nam pani mówiła.
In the article ‘Einstein’s unusual brain’ the author Mo Costandi describes the most interesting facts about Einstein’s brain.
First of all many people want to study Einstains brain, beacuse he was one of the most intelligent man on this planet. One of them – pathologist Thomas Harvey removed Einstain’s brain and put into formalin. Later he cut brain into parts and made microscope photographs. At the end he sent this photo to other neuropathologists. Autopsy Einstein’s brain performed by Harvey show nothing interested. However, decades later in 1985 researchers notice higher than average glia for every neuron and parietal lobe lacks: a furrow, which lead to enhance the connection and improve mathematical skills and an operculum. Another scientists Dean Falk and her colleagues also analyse 12 of Harvey’s photographs and they discover that cerebral cortex is very complex and convolutions have a specific pattern for example in prefrontal cortex which have influence on abstract thinking. In addition, they found that right somatosensory cortex is bigger, maybe because Einstain often play a violin.
To sum up we know much more about Einstein’s brain, but still many facts of it might be discover in the future.