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Hi Sam
I'm sorry I haven't answered your emails for while. I got injured on football pitch. I played on a goalkeeper position and striker with opponent team was shot for my team goal. The ball hit me in my stomach. I felt sudden pain and after two hours I started feel sickness. My teammates rang by hospital so I got quickly help.
Doctor said my that he diagnosed me appendix burst so I had surgery. When I came round I feel good but troubled me light pain so nurse gave me painkiller.
Furthermore she said me that I must respect some rule I must stay in bed and follow a sensible diet and get enough sleep.
Because I can't leave home I'm bored. Could you sent me something lectures? I like read about economic, psychology and marketing. Thanks in advance.
Looking forward to hearing from you,
All the best
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I'm sorry I haven't answered your emails for while. I got injured on THE football pitch. I played on a goalkeeper position and striker with opponent team was shot for my team goal. The ball hit me in my stomach. I felt sudden pain and after two hours I started feelING sickness. My teammates rang bynp FOR AN AMBULANCE hospital so I got HELP quickly help.
edytowany przez Aaric: 25 sty 2018
Doctor said my that
Furthermore she said me that I must
TOLD ME, SAID TO ME

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