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Dear Max,
How are you? Sorry , I can't writing to you ,because i got small problem in my school. I'm very bizy. I spend a loot time in my books. I learn very hart to my egzam. What ebove you , in your school ,you are bizy? I think so you don't have any problems?
I was in cinema and i meet nice boy.His name is Kamil. We spend a loot time together , wewalk a longtime in the park and to the cinema. We have favorite hobby , we play in basketball and listening roch music. That wey we toking a loot. I'm not see you long time so I would like see you in my holidays. Please write me what you doing and what you thinks above my propozycion. I send very hot greet for you and your girl. I waiting on the answer from you.
Tak care !
xyz

Dear Max,
How are you?
Sorry, I DIDN’T WRITE to you because I HAD A small problem AT school.
I WAS very BUSY, I SPENT a LOT OF time in my books. I STUDIED very HARD FOR my EXAM.

What ABOUT you , in your school , ARE YOU BUSY? I HOPE you don't have any problems?

I was AT THE cinema and I MET A nice boy. His name is Kamil. We spend a LOT OF time together , we GO FOR LONG WALKS in the park and to the cinema. We have THE SAME hobby , we BOTH play basketball and LISTEN TO ROCK music. That WAY we CAN TALK a LOT.

I HAVEN’T SEEN you FOR A long time so I would like TO see you in my holidays. Please write TO me ABOUT what you’RE doing and what you THINK ABOUT MY IDEA.

I send very WARM greetINGS for you and your girl. I’M waiting FOR YOUR REPLY.
TakE care !
xyz

Nie wiem dlaczego "zjadlo mi" duze litery. Coz...
Anyway, I hope it helps...
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