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In the Philadelphia we are touring the Independence Hall and the Liberty Bell (dzwon wolności). We are going to Independence National Historic Park. There we are watching the film about the recovery the independence by the American Colony. In Independence Hall made and signed the Independence Declaration. Liberty Bell hung in Independence Hall announced victorys and defeats on the war. In Independence National Historic Park stay the Kościuszko's house (Thaddeus Kosciuszko National Memorial) with exposition shows the merits for the american revolution.

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Tower is situated closely above the Niagara waterfall. In the swivel cupola is the restaurant and the souvenir shop. On bright day outlook from the tower gets 130km at. It helds the evening illumination with lights. To interested (dla zainteresowanych) in possibly is ship cruise with additional payment.

cruise - rejs
get at - sięgać
closely above - tuż nad (?)

In 'the' (wiem, ze lubisz to 'the' uzywac, ale nie wszedzie) Philadelphia we 'are' (chyba will be) touring the Independence.. We (will be) going to Independence National HistorY Park. There we 'are' (will be) watching the film about the recovery OF the ..
In Independence Hall (alt kto??) made and signed the Independence Declaration. Liberty Bell hung in Independence Hall announced victorIES and defeats DURING the war. In THE Independence National HistorY Park 'stay' (is located 'the' -'bez the' T. Kościuszko's house with AN exposition WHICH shows the merits OF the
American Revolution.

THE tower is situated closely above the 'Niagra waterfall' (chociaz to jest znane jako 'Niagra Falls'). In the swivel cupola THERE is 'A' restaurant and 'A' souvenir shop. On 'A' bright day THE outlook from the tower 'gets' (allows a view of over) 130km 'at' (co to 'at' tutaj robi na koncu zdania?).
'It' (to znaczy co?)'helds' (holds) the evening illumination with lights )lepiej The evenine is illuminated by lights). 'To' (for those) interested in (ale w czym?) (there is a) possibILITY OF A ship..