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Kotel ha-Maariw (ściana płaczu) was built 2027 years ago. It is the most saint place for believers of Judaism. Herod commanded to built the building.This wall is unique [jedyne] safe part of Jerusalem’s sanctuary .
Every day there go hundred people.They pray, kiss stones ,touch they [ich] and put in it own tagles.On this tagles are requests to God.They believes that this requests will be realize [spelnione]
During the feastes [świąt] this part of sanctuary becomes central place for whole[wszystkich] ceremonies.This place visited many famous people ,for example John Paul II,Madonna,Michael Jakcson .
Every year,in August,Jews celebrate feast near this place.Then they lamented destruction of sanctuary by Romans. Near the wall ,many years ago,was announced [ogloszony] unification of Jerosolima.
It’s usual wall but Jews believe that every person should visit this place.It’s their religion and belief [wiara]
Proponowałbym tak:
This wall is the only safe part of Jerusalem's sanctuary.
Every day it's being visited by hundereds of people.(musi być forma bierna)
touch them zamiast touch they

On this tangles they write requets to God. Thay believe that these requests will become fulfilled.
During the FEASTS this part of sanctuary becomes central the place for all the ceremonies. This place has been visited by many famous people, for example John Paul II, Madonna and Michael Jackson. Then they lament the destruction of sanctuary done by Romans. Many years ago, near the wall the unification of Jerosolima has been announced.
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