report - bardzo proszę o sprawdzenie :)

mam do napisania na jutro raport o odżywianiu młodzieży na podstawie wymyślonej ankiety. Stowrzyłam już coś, ale sądzę, że w moim tekście jest sporo błędów, dlatego bardzo proszę o naniesienie poprawek. Będę bardzo wdzięczna za pomoc :*

kliknęłam wyślij, zanim wkleiłam tekst, zatem zamieszczam go tutaj. jeszcze raz proszę o pomoc, z góry dzięki :)

Report:
To: Jane Smith
From: Anne Thompson
Subject: The eating habits of young people

Purpose
The purpose of this report is to see the results of a survey, which was carried out for analyse eating habits of young people. Hundred of 15-year-old polish people were questioned about their meals.

Time
Young people have to do lots of things, so they do not have enough time for regular meals. This is illustrated by the fact that forty-two per cent of teenagers do not eat breakfast or dinner. They prefer eating quickly then with family at home.

Quality
Almost eighty per cent of people who participated in the survey like eating in fast food restaurants. They do not complain about quality of food. This shows that teenagers prefer cheap, unhealthy meals then traditional.

Kinds of food
A large number of people enjoy eating traditional food, but only occasionally. Most teenagers like meat and fat food, but only two in five eat fruits and vegetables regularly. There are also vegetarians among polish teenagers. One in six of people who participed in the survey do not eat meat.

Conclussion
To sum up, it seems that globalisation has a big influence on eating habits of teenagers. Young people rather prefer eating fast and cheap with friends then triaditional meals with family.

..is to 'see'(examine, evaluate) the results of a survey, which
was carried out 'for' TO analyse THE eating habits of young people. Hundred of
15-year-old polish people were questioned about their meals.
...This is illustrated by the fact that 42% of teenagers do not eat breakfast or dinner. They prefer eating quickly thAn with THE family at home.
Almost 80% of people who participated in the survey like eating in fast food 'restaurants' (establishments). They do not complain about THE quality of
THE food. This shows that teenagers prefer cheap, unhealthy meals thAn
traditional (ale co? meals)
Most teenagers like meat and 'fat' food (food containing saturated fats?), but only two...One in six of THE people who participed in the survey do not..
ConcluSion
..globalisation has a big influence on THE eating habits of teenagers.
Young people rather prefer eating fast and cheap (cos tu brakuje) with friends than traDITIOnal meals with THE family.