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Temat przeniesiony do archwium.
Tanorexia - dependence from sunbathing. The persons dependent on from solarium feel the need of continuous of sunbathing. They have impression that their skin is pale, and this mean for them inattractive appearance. Unceasingly so enlarge the frequency and time of sunbathing. Tanoreksja requires psychological therapy.
Efekt natural and artificial sunbathing:
-growth of risk of falling ill on cancer of skin
-dryness and loss of elasticity of skin
-acceleration of aging the skin
-spread the blood vessel of skin
-creating unsightly "spots" on result of irregular arrangement the dye of skin
-baking, swellings and reddening skin
-callosity and hardening skin
-damage of eyesight

On sunbathing sunny the most be subject persons about bright complexion, blond and red hair.
Sloraria use lamps which emit very harmful UVA. Sunbathe bed exposes on a lot of larger dose radiations than stay on the sun.

Every mole, freckles exclude using from solarium. The particularly high risk of development of and remaining tumours malicious melanoma skin such persons be burdened.

If someone depends on tan then solution can be here salf tanner with is healthier from sunbathing on the sun or in solarium.


Bardzo prosze o poprawienie, mam problemy z gramatycznym ukladaniem zdan:( z gory bardzo dziekuje.
Bardzo prosze o poprawienie, mam problemy z gramatycznym ukladaniem
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