Proszę o sprawdzenie " report'u "

TO: Tom Allan, editor of newspaper
FROM: Beata Gazda, journalist
Subject: Good and bad points of the Bayside Sports Centre.
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The purpose of this report is to asses the good and bad points of the Bayside Sports Centre.
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Fascilities
There is a wide range of activities available. Moreover the equipment is all new and modern. Everyone can find something for ourselves. Nevertheless, there are not enough evercise machines so members have to wait for a long time which is unsuitable in particular when we are hurry.
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Prices and Opening Hours
The openning hours are from 10am to 10pm seven days a week. Which is good, because we can come any time we want. However, prices are competitive and there are not many special offers.
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Service and staff
The Centre offers numerously well-trained instructors who are at our disposal every time when we want to. In addition, we can have additional trainings with them. Besides there is sufficient staff. Even though, they are slow to help and staff is not very friendly which is not enjoyable.
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Conclusion
In conclusion, It seems to me that there are as many bad points as good.
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...purpose of this report is to assesS the good and bad points of the
FaCilities
everyone can find something for 'ourselves' (themselves).
...not enough eXercise machines so members have to wait for a long time which is unsuitable in particular when we are IN A hurry.
...'Which' (nie zaczynaj zdania z which, lepiej zrobic to jedno zdanie) However, prices are competitive and there are 'not' many special offers (cos tu niema sensu, jak prices sa competitive, to znaczy 'reasonable/cheap, czy mialas na mysli..there are many offers?)
The Centre offers numerouS well-trained ..
In addition, we can have additional trainiNG with them. 'Besides there is sufficient staff' (co chcesz napisac przez to 'besides')
'Even though' (chyba tutaj 'although - sprawdz co chcesz napisac), they are slow to help and staff ARE not very friendly which is not enjoyable.
In conclusion, it seems to me