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What do you think about your town? Is it in your opinion a clean place, where you could breathe fresh air without any pollution? Have you here any fresh water to drink or swim? Unfortunately, it doesn’t seem like that. In our city we have too much polluted water and everyone should think about how we can improving the quality of water in the local rivers and lakes. Polluted water basin is the one of state problem, but next are people which throw litter everywhere, factories dump industrial waste. It causing that we can’t swim and drink the water, because it’s too dirty! It’s high time to do something to make our town a better place!
At first we should organize a clean up campaign, where volunteers clean up surrounding us rivers and lakes. Another idea to make our town more clean is put more rubbish bins. In this way we will have less litter in water.
Other solution can be to fine factories that dump industrial waste into lakes and rivers. The consequence of this idea would be decrease water pollution and make cleaner water.
The best solution for our town can be when people and industry work together! When we join our strong, we clean up our rivers and lakes. In this way we can swim and use the water again.

'Have you here' (lepiej Do you have) any fresh water to drink or TO swim IN? Unfortunately, it doesn't ALWAYS seem like that.
...should think about how we can improvE the quality of water in the...
Polluted water basin is 'the one of state problem' (zla kolejnosc slow - is one of the state's main problems), but next are people whO throw litter everywhere,
AND THE factories WHICH dump industrial waste. 'It causES' (lepiej...The result is that we..) that we can't swim...
... volunteers clean up THE surrounding rivers and lakes. Another idea to make our town 'more clean' (lepiej cleaner) is TO put more rubbish bins.
ANOTHER solution can be to fine factories WHICH dump industrial waste...
...water pollution and TO make cleaner water.
When we join 'our strong' (niewiem co masz na mysli tutaj..czy our forces), we CAN clean up our rivers and lakes.

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