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I have seen a film by Billy Condon( to jest jego prawdziwe nazwisko i prosze bez żadnych skojarzeń) . It was titled “Dreamgirls”. This film is based on a Toma Eyena book and a musical "Dreamgirls" from 80 years. The action of the film is starting in Detroit in years 60.
This film is telling about three Lorrell friends ( Anika Noni Rose), Deena (Beyoncé Knowles) and Effie (Jennifer Hudson) whose established The Dreamettes team and they want to become musical stars. But they aren't making a success of it. On the certain competition Curtis is observing them Taylor which is settling for them of a concert tour with the well-known singer Elary James (Eddie Murphy). After a few concerts they are starting the own career. He/she is reaching amongst them of quarrels which are a reason of resigning of one of them from the team. To her place a new vocalist is turning up. The film is ending with the performance of the entire four of vocalists. In this film we can hear a lot of familiar pieces sung by actors. Actors played great but they sang too loud. The plot isn't "Dreamgirls" complicated but she is predictable and she is based on the authentic history of the The Supremes team.
In conclusion I liked the film. The music very well was composed. Competently she emphasized moods prevailing on the screen and it is thanks to one of the most outstanding authors of a soundtrack a Henry Krieger.
I recommend everyone who likes to listen this film and to watch musicals.

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I 'have seen' (tutaj lepiej I saw) a film by Billy Condon.
This film is based on a 'Toma Eyena book' (nie, to jest zpolszczone w jez ang. mowimy ...a book by Tom Eyen) and a musical "Dreamgirls" from 80 years AGO. The action of the film 'is starting' (starts) in Detroit in 'years 60' (to nie gram - lepiej ..in the 1960s)
This film 'is telling' (lepiej TELLS) THE STORY OF three Lorrell friends Anika, Deena and Effie WHO established The Dreamettes team and 'they' (to jest niepotr) want to become musical stars. But they 'aren't making' (lepiej ..don't seem to be making a success of 'this'. IN 'the' (bez the) A certain competition Curtis (a kto to jest Curtis?) 'is observing' (observes) them AND 'settling' (nie, lepiej arranges for them) A concert tour with A well-known singer Elary James. After a few concerts 'they are starting' (they start) theIR own career.
'He/she' (tego nie rozumiem kto?) is reaching amongst them of quarrels which are a 'reason' (jak piszesz 'are' to oczekujemy reasons-l. mnoga) of THE resignATION of one of them from the team.- To zdanie jest za dlugie, za komplikowane - zrob z tego 2 zdania.
IN her place a new vocalist is 'turning up' (turning up -to jest tutaj kolokw. lepiej ..is engaged). The film 'is ending' (ENDS) with the performance of the entire four 'of' (of-jest niepotr) vocalists. In this
film we can hear a lot of familiar 'pieces' (moze songs) sung by actors. Actors
'played' (actors ACT, ale jest zla kol. slow..lepiej..The acting is 'great' (nie, lepiej tremendous, fine), but the singing too loud. The plot OF 'isn't "Dreamgirls"' (zla kolejnosc slow ..of Dreamgirls isn't) complicated but 'she' (to znaczy kto? jak plot to 'it') is predictable and 'she' (IT) is based on the authentic history of (Diana Ross and The Supremes) 'team' (team -nie potr).
In conclusion I liked the film. The music 'very well was composed' (zla kolejnosc slow - was composed very well).
'Competently she emphasized' (zla kolej slow...she emphasized competently) THE moods prevailing on the screen and it is thanks to one of the most outstanding authors of a soundtrack 'a'(bez 'a') Henry Krieger.
I recommend (co?) THIS FILM) TO everyone who likes to listen and to watch musicals.