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Shah Rukh Khan (Shahrukh Khan; SRK) - the most popular actor in Bollywood, Indian center of cinematography.
He was born on November 2 1965 in New Deli, capital of India. He started his career in theatre. SRK became more famous after playing in serial “Fauji" in 1988. On October 25 1991 he married Gauri Chibber, his friend from university. For a first time Shahrukh Khan appeared on a big screen in film “Deewana" in 1992. He got Filmware price for this film, as the best debut. Then he started to play in a great number of films. In 1997, his first child, son Aryan, was born. Three years later he got second child, daughter Suhana.
Today Shah Rukh Khan his the most famous Indian actor, he played in 51 films, now he is working on 5 films and lead Indian version of “Millionaire".
Kajol (Kajol Devgan, née Mukherjee) - one of the most famous actress in India. She was born in August 5, 1975. In age of 16 she left school to start film career. In 1992 she played in her first film, but it didn't give her a big success. However, she still was playing in films. From 1992 to 2006 Kajol acted in 26 films and she won 6 prizes for the best actress. In 1999 Kajol married Ajay Devgan and they have one daughter, Nysa Devgan, born in 2003.
Kajol and SRK played together in five films:
Baazigar
Karan Arjun
Dilwale Dulhania Le Jayenge (Żona dla zuchwałych; Brave-Heart Will Take the Bride / Lovers Will Walk Off with the Bride / The Big-Hearted Will Win the Bride)
Kuch Kuch Hota Hai (AKA Something Is Happening / KKHH/Coś się dzieje)
Kabhi Khushi Kabhie Gham (AKA Sometimes Happiness, Sometimes Sorrow / Happiness & Tears / K3G / KKKG / Sometimes Happy, Sometimes Sad/ Czasem słońce, czasem deszcz)

Everyone of theme were a huge success.


Dziękuję!

He was born on November 2 1965 in New DelHi, 'THE' capital of India. He
started his career in 'THE' theatre. SRK became 'more' (niewiem czy to more tutaj pasuje) famous after playing (a role) in 'THE' serial “Fauji" in 1988.
...'For' (bez for) THE first time Shahrukh Khan appeared on a big screen 'WAS' in (tutaj dalabym rok in 1992)in 'THE' film “Deewana".
He 'got' (moze lepiej 'received') 'THE' Filmware priZe ('price' znaczy cos innego) 'for this film, as the best debut'(mysle, ze to lepiej bedzie as the best debut for this film).
'Then' (lepiej He followed this by playing in...) he started to play in a great number of films.
Three years later he 'got'(moze lepiej 'had' his) second child, 'A' daughter 'NAMED' Suhana.
Today Shah Rukh Khan 'IS' the most famous Indian actor, he 'HAS' played in 51
films. 'Now' (moze lepiej Currently,) he is working on 5 films and leadING 'THE' Indian version of "Millionaire".
Kajol (Kajol Devgan, née Mukherjee) - one of the most famous actressES
in India. She was born 'ON' August 5, 1975. 'AT THE' age of 16 she left school to start 'HER' film career. In 1992 she played in her first film, but it
'didn't give her' (lepiej wasn't a) big success. However, she 'still was' (zla kol. slow-was still) (moze lepiej 'continued to star in films) playing in films.
Every one of them (lepiej every film) 'WAS' a huge success.

Dzięki ;)