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My favourite film is Armagedon.
It is a science-fiction film.
The film is about the fight between people and a great meteor. If it come down , our planet would be destroyed. Dan Thruman, played by Billy Bob ,drilled hol and he will place ther nucleary bomb. Harry Stamper, played by Bruce Willis,is the only men who her detonation,. Mission with Harry Stamper and his friends was successful, but he must ded.I like this film, because is gut miusic, graphic and he`s long.
The topic of film is save Earth of destruction.
My favourite film is Armagedon.(*czy nie przypadkiem DD?)
If it 'come' (3osl.poj dodajemy 's') down, our planet would be destroyed.Dan Thruman, played by Billy Bob,drilleS A 'hol' (literowka?) WHERE he will place the 'nucleary' (ortog) bomb. Harry Stamper, played by Bruce Willis,is the only 'men' (men to l. mnoga tutaj potrzeba l. poj) who 'her' (nie rozumiem tego her tutaj) 'detonation' (potrzeba czasownika - ..who can d...... it)
THE mission...but he must 'ded' (ortog) .I like this film, because IT is 'gut' (ortog) 'miusic' (ortog), graphicS and 'he`s' (nie, film tutaj to IT) long.
The topic of film is save THE Earth 'of' FROM Destruction.

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