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More than Luck
You always think : „ What makes you feel happy ? “. It’s money ? good marks at school ? or your first love? Maybe everything what I suggested. Ashley’s story is different. She is a young woman, who thought that word is perfect. Unfortunatelly it is’t true, and she find out too late. What do you think ? if she can be happy, Will her dreams cames true ? Let’s check.
Ashley was 13, when she come to the new school. She isn’t shy girl, and she always have many friends. Unfortunatelly she meet one funny and inteligent boy, and before two months she fall in love with him. He didn’t know about them. She was very sad. Sometimes she cry in her room, because there’s nothing she can do with that. You think, why she didn’t want tell him ? The answer is very easy. She thought that she couldn’t have the boy like him. That love persist in her three years. She try to be with somebody else, but she didn’t able. That first love broke her heart. She thought that it can be easier, but she’s wrong. She gone to other school, and didn’t see him long time. She still didn’t forget about him. One day in the summer, they met at the sea. It was evening. Sea was very quiet. Ashley set on the beach and looking at the sun. Sudennly, someone drum her! It was John! She was very startled, and she come to him. He was very happy to found her. He told her one beautiful thing. He felt in love when he saw her in first day at school, but he didn’t her about it, because he is shy for girls. She was really happy, and she told him the same truth. And they live long and happy. Ashley know that, love which she have is more than luck.


Proszę, bo nie jestem pewna tego, czy ktoś byłby tak dobry aby poprawić moje błędy ? :)

dzięki za pomoc ;]

'It's' (IS IT) money, good marks at school or your first love? Maybe everything 'what' THAT I suggested.
...thought that 'word' (word to slowo - chyba 'world') is perfect. UnfortunateLy it is't true, and she 'find' FOUND (czas przeszly) out too late. Ashley was 13, when she 'come' CAME to 'the' A new school. She 'isn't' WASN'T A shy girl, and she always haD many friends. UnfortunateLy she meT one funny
and intelLigent boy, and before two months (were out) she 'fall' FELL in love with him.
He didn't know about 'them' (them - her dreams?). Sometimes she WOULD cry in her
room, because there's nothing she 'can' COULD do with that. You WOULD think, why she didn't want TO tell him? She thought that she couldn't have the boy like 'him' (chyba her). That love persist in her three years.
She trIED to be with somebody else, but she 'didn't' WASN'T able.
...but 'she's' SHE WAS wrong.
She 'gone' WENT to ANother school and SHE didn't see him long time.
One day in the summer, they met at the seaSIDE.
THE sea was very quiet. Ashley 'set' SAT on the beach and WAS looking at the sun. SudDenly, someone 'drum'? (nie rozumiem tego slowa - drum) her!
...and she 'come' CAME to him. He was very happy to HAVE found her. He 'felt' FELL in love when he saw her 'in' THE first day at school, but he didn't TELL her about it, because he 'is' WAS VERY shy 'for' ABOUT girls.
And they live A long and A happy LIFE. Ashley knEw that, THE love which she haS is more than luck.