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Plastic surgery -vanity or a need.
I think hat most of all cases it is only vanity.Plastic surgery is for me just waste of time and money.
When we hear about plastic surgery , most of us think about Hollywood star trying to delay the effect of aging. People want to change their size of stomachs, breasts, or other body parts becouse they see it done so easily on TV. The most part of them decide they want a cosmetic change becouse they're not happy about the way they look. The most common procedures choose include nose reshaping , ear surgery , acne and acne scan treatment and breast reduction. We see plastic surgery as a way to fit in and look acceptable or a way to stand out from the crown. Some people turn to plastic surgery to correct a psyhical deffect or to alter a part of body that makes them feel uncomfortable. I think that having cosmetic surgery just to change your apperance isn't good idea . In my mind body is made by god and should not be altred, we should learn to love this body which we have got . But when we born with disadvantages situation is changeing we should have right to spruce oneself. Unfortunately person which really need this kind of reconstructive haven'rt enough money.
When I see children die of cancer or anyone die from cancer , or die other diseases , then plastic surgery sounds so vain to me. Each one of these patient with diseases would give everything to be just themselves and live, while healthy people spent big money for useless operation.

I think That IN most 'of all' (niepotr)cases it is only vanity.Plastic
surgery is for me just A waste of time and money. When we hear about plastic surgery , most of us think about A Hollywood star..People want to
change their size of stomachs, breasts, or other body parts 'becouse' BECAUSE - z 'A')they see it done so easily on TV. 'The' (niepotr) Most 'part' (niepotrz) (mozna powiedziec...The majority of them...)of them decide they
want a cosmetic change becAuse they're not happy about the way they
look. The most common procedures choseN include ..
...or a way to stand out from the crowD. Some people turn to plastic surgery to
correct a pHYsical deffect or to alter a part of THEIR body 'that' WHICH makes them feel uncomfortable. I think that having cosmetic surgery just to
change your appeArance isn't A good idea. In my mind, body is made by God (duza litera) and should not be altEred, we should learn to love thE body which we
have. But when we ARE born with disadvantages, THE situation 'is' (niepotr) changeS AND we should have THE right to spruce 'oneself' OURSELVES (dlatego, ze mowisz o 'we'). Unfortunately THE person 'which' WHO (o ludziach to zawsze 'who') really needS this kind of reconstructive SURGERY haSn't GOT enough money.
When I see children die of cancer or anyone die from cancer , or
die FROM other diseases, then plastic surgery sounds VERY vain to me. Each
one of these patientS with diseases..

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