prośba o sprawdzenie zdania

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czy któs mógłby sprawdzić poniższe zdanie i nanieść ewentualne poprawki.

z góry dziekuje

"It isn't a job that I was looking for, but I came to a conclusion, that I have to go to any job, first of all, to improve my English and in the meantime I will keep learning Flash, and I hope that soon I'll find some more interesting work"
>"It isn't a job that I was looking for, but I have come to the conclusion
>that I had better take any job [whatever job I'm offered], first of all, to improve my English and
>in the meantime I will keep learning Flash, and I hope that soon I'll
>find some more interesting work"
many thanks :)