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Temat: What do you do in the fall is coming.Present Simple.

When fall is coming I fells gloomily,but I haves methods to makes better humour.I five times in week goes to school.I’am usually finishes lessons at 3 p.m. After school I'm returns to home,and i'm eats dinner.I'm often meets my friends in the afternoon.When we meets,we plays on playstation 2 and drinks beer.In the evening i'm seldom reads the books. I'm goes to stadium cheers on my favourite football club Legia Warszawa twice a month.I'm often in the weekend plays football in hall.I'm every month goes with my firends to the shops.I'm goes to the cinema twice a month. With my friends we goes to swimming pool every week.Every week i'm have planned and fall is quickly end.

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When fall is coming I fell gloomily,but I have methods to makes better humour.I five times in week go to school. I’am usually finish lessons at 3 p.m. After school i'm return to home, and i'm eat dinner.I'm often meet my friends in the afternoon.When we meet ,we plays on playstation 2 and drink beer.In the evening i'm seldom read the books. I'm go to stadium cheers on my favourite football club Legia Warszawa twice a month.I'm often in the weekend play football in hall.I'm every month go with my firends to the shops.I'm goes to the cinema twice a month. With my friends we go to swimming pool every week.Every week i'm have planned and fall is quickly end.

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When fall is coming I 'fell' (fell to potknac sie, co masz na mysli to FEEL) gloomily, but I have methods to 'makes' MAKE (tutaj lepiej myself feel better) 'I five times in week go to school' (zla kol slow - Five times a week I go to school). 'I'am' (I'm znaczy 'I am' - ty masz na mysli 'I') usually finish lessons at 3 p.m. After school 'i'm' (nie I'm tylko 'I') return 'to' (niepotrz) home, and 'i'm' 'I' (wielka litera) eat dinner.'I'm' (nie, tylko 'I')often meet my friends in the afternoon. When we meet, we 'plays' (plays to tylko jak odnosi sie do 3os l.poj tutaj we PLAY) on Playstation 2 and drink beer. In the evening 'i'm' (tutaj tez tylko 'I') seldom read 'the' ANY books.
'I'm' (I) go to A FOOTBALL stadium TO cheer on my favourite football club Legia Warszawa twice a month. 'I'm(niepotrz) Often 'in' AT the weekend I play football in THE hall. 'I'm' (niepotr) Every month I go with my 'firends' (friends) to the shops. 'I'm goes' I GO to the cinema twice a
month. With my friends we go to THE swimming pool every week. Every week
'i'm' 'I' have planned and THIS WAY THE fall 'is quickly end' QUICKLY ENDS.

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i jeszcze nie powinno byc 'I feel gloomy' a nie '...gloomily'?

tak, - feel gloomy