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How can we make our cities more environmentally friendly?
Imagine a our cities with no plants and no animals. It is hard to imagine this becaus we love animals and plants . One of the problems is pollutio, for example car fumer cause air pollution or contaminetion. We have sometimes problem with breathing. Yet there are terrible special parks shortages for our children. We all need fresh oxygen.Not just for factories but to threes .Fortunatelly there are things we can all t o do cleanness our cities. the solutions is right. First of all we should leave our cars at home and we use our bicycles ,cities would be less poluted. We can also walk more often.Next problems is rubbish.We should always throw our litter into bins.The authorities can also help our cities. People wouldn't drop litter in streets, as soon as the authorities put bins on every street covner.Many animals endangere species .When the out authorities created more specials parks for animals, they wouldn't be in danger .All in all there are many things we can make our cities . Prosze o pomoc
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Imagine 'a' (niepotr) our cities with no plants and no animals.
...imagine this becausE we love animals and plants. One of the problems
is pollutioN for example car fumeS cause air pollution or contaminAtion. 'We have sometimes' (zla kol slow ...sometimes we have) problem with breathing.
Yet there are 'terrible special parks shortages' (zla kol slow shortages of parks for) for our children. .
Not just for factories but to 'threes' (three to '3' tutaj TREES). 'Fortunatelly' (ortog) there are MANY things we can all DO to 'do' (niepotr) 'cleanness' CLEANSE our cities. The solutions 'is' (jak solutions to potrzeba l.mn. od 'is'- ARE) right.
First of all we should leave our cars at home and we SHOULD use our bicycles
cities would be less poluted. THE next 'problems' (tutaj l. poj probleM) is rubbish. People wouldn't drop litter in streets, 'as soon as' IF the authorities put bins on every street coRner. Many animals ARE endangereD species .'When the out' IF THE authorities created more specials parks for animals, they wouldn't be in danger.
All in all there are many things we can DO TO make our cities CLEANER.

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