First conditional - proszę o sprawdzenie

Proszę o sprawdzenie łańcucha zdań .

first conditional

If I catch a cold I will stay in bed.
If i stay in bed I will sleep all day.
If I sleep all day I will be rested.
If I am rested I will read a book.
If I read a book, I will have some new information.
If I have some new information I will talk with my friend.
If I talk with my friend I will invite she for caffe.
If I invite she for caffe I will gossip with with she.
If I gossip with she I will bring some sweeties.
Id I bring some sweeties I will eat it.

Poprawne uzycie czasow, ale masz problem z tzw. zaimkami dzierzawczymi, np.


If I talk with my friend, i will invite HER for coffee.

If I invite HER for coffee, I will gossip with HER.

To zdanie: If I gossip with HER, I will bring some sweets - nie ma dla mnie sensu w przetlumaczeniu na polski i raczej w zaden sposob nie odnosi sie do 1st Conditional. Zalezy co chcesz powiedziec, co masz na mysli?

I na koniec:

If I bring some sweets I will eat THEM!

Pcwicz na zaimkami dzierzawczymi - naprawde nie sa trudne.

A takze zly spelling: COFFEE! I SWEETS, nie(!) SWEETIES.


Pozdrawiam,

Marta