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What are the advantages and disadvantages of being a professional dancer?

From my point of view dance is the most beautiful and interesting kind of sport. It seems to me that dancer should love music, move and hard work, because he or she must spend hours on training. I have no doubt that being a professional dancer has more advantages than disadvantages and I want prove it.
In the first place I want to notice that dance and of course majority kind of sport causes that sportsmen happen fit, strong and self-confident. Every form of move, if we have a success help us to believe in our powers and skills. Professional dancer after years realize that he have done something incredibly.
Secondly, to my mind pro dancer if work on the stage and if he loves it he can go through life in a happy-go-lucky. When professional dancers make a good job, they in high spirits.(swietny nastroj?) Every prize make dancers sit on the top of the world. (chodzi mi o to że nie posiadaja sie z radosci, jest taki zwrot tylko nie wiem czy dobrze go uzylam) Certainly to win they must work so hard, but the best award of their tears and sweat is appreciate by friend, family and public.
However, there are disadvantages of being pro dancer. For instance if dancer though his hard work hasn’t any success or if he has contusion, which eliminate from game.
All things considered it seems to me that being a professional dance can be a very gratifying experience and if luck will give me a chance I won’t mind about it and I want use my chance.

z gory dziekuje;)

From my point of view dance is the most beautiful and interesting
kind of 'sport' (nie wiem, czy sport to najlepsze slowo tutaj). It seems to me that A dancer should love music, moveMENT and hard work, because he or she must spend hours 'on' (niepotr) training. I have no doubt that being a professional dancer has more advantages than disadvantages and I want TO 'prove it' (prove it- to nigdy nie zrobisz, ale co mozesz to ...explain my views).
In the first place I want to 'notice' NOTE that dancING and of course THE majority OF ANY kindS of sport causes that sportsmen 'happen fit' (CO? - prosze popraw) strong and self-confident. Every form of 'move' (ruszaj?) MOVEMENT, if we have 'a' (niepotr) success helpS us to believe in our powers and skills. A rofessional dancer after years AND YEARS OF PRACTICE realize that 'he' (she?) lepiej THEY have done something incredibly (ale incredibly co? wonderful, tremendous?).
Secondly, to my mind A proFESSIONAL dancer if HE workS on the stage and if HE loves 'it' (czy to znaczy stage?) he can go through life in a happy-go-lucky MANNER. When professional dancers make a good job, they ARE in high spirits. Every prize makeS dancers sit on the top of the world. Certainly to win ANYTHING they must work 'so' VERY hard, but the best award of their tears and sweat is THE appreciatION SHOWN TO THEM BY THEIR friendS, family and THE public.
However, there are disadvantages of being A proFESSIONAL dancer. For instance if
THE dncer though hE WORKS hard 'hasn't' DOESN'T HAVE any success or if he has contusion, which MAY eliminate HIM from THE game.
All things considered it seems to me that being a professional danceR
can be a very gratifying experience and if luck will give me a chance
I won't mind 'about it' (tu cos nie tak - prosze napisz w calosci) and I want TO use my chance.

wielkie dzieki;)

chodzilo mi w ostatnim zdaniu o to ze jakbym ja miala szanse byc takim tancerzem tio bym sie nie wahala i wykorzystala szanse

..experience and if I was luckY enough to be given a chance to be a professional dancer I would certainly grab it with both hands.