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Temat: If you won a prize in a competition and you could buy three things for $500 each, what would you buy?

I haven't ever won a prize in a competition, but if I won it, I would think very long about the fact, what I would buy. I think I could buy three things for $550 each.
The first things I would buy will be the presents for my family and friends. I think they will be jealous of me and I would make happy them. When I buy them some presents, they will know, that I remember them and I am not selfish.
The second things I would buy will be some presents for me. I would buy some books, clothes, and many other things which I dreamt about. I think I would be happy if I bought me some gifts.
If I didn't know on what I could spent the rest of my money, I would pay it on a charity organisation. I know that in the world are people, who need more money than I. I like helping needy people.
This topic was difficult for me, because I am not materialistic and I don't believe that I could win such a lot of money. I think that money doesn't bring happiness and there are lots of rich people, who are not happy.
..I would think very long about the fact OF what I would buy.
The first things I would buy will be 'the' (niepotr) presents for my family and
friends. I think they 'will' WOULD be jealous of me and I would make 'happy
them' (szczesliwych ich-czy ich szczesliwych, tutaj THEM HAPPY). When I 'buy' BOUGHT them some presents, they 'will' WOULD know, that I rememberED
them and I am not selfish.
The second things I would buy 'will' WOULD be some presents for me. I would
buy some books, clothes, and many other things which I 'dreamt' (albo dreaM, albo have dreamt) about.
If I didn't know on what I could spent the rest of my money, I would
pay it 'on' TO a charitABLE organisation. I know that in the world THERE are people, who need more money than I DO.

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