Recenzja filmu

Chciałbym aby ktos sprawdził recenzje filmu Edward Nożycoręki:) Za poprawki bardzo dziękuje:)
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Edward Scissorhands is a dramatic film with elements of fantasy, the film is set in small town. That film is directed by Tim Burton. The film tells the story of boy-cyborg Edward, who has scissors instead of hands. Johnny Deep plays the starring role as Edward.
Edward lives in a obscure, derelict castle. When someday Avon consultant Peg Boggs comes to his estate. She meets Edward and she decided to take him to her house. She wants that Edward acclimatize in town and other people get to like him. After dinner with Pegs family Edward fall in love with Pegs daughter Kim played by Winona Ryder. Edward works like a gardener and a hairdresser. People slowly starts like him, but Kim’s boyfriend every day more and more hates him, because he see that Edward loves Kim. One evening Edward with Kim and her friends broke into house, suddenly the alarm turn on. Everyone escaped, but Edward can’t open a door with ball handle. He escaped from the police to his castle and the chase starts. Is Kim loves Edward too? Can she protect him from peoples hate and prevent a inhabitants revenge?
Edward Scissorhands is well directed and the Depps acting is amaizing. The music is composed by Danny Elfman and is excellent. The film presents a problem loneliness, incomprehension and rejection “different” person.
Although, the main character is cyborg, the film is believable and I can thoroughly recommend it. It is a classic study of tolerance and sympathy.

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Edward Scissorhands is a dramatic film with elements of fantasy. The
film is set in small town.
'That' THIS film is directed by Tim Burton, AND tells the story of boy-cyborg Edward, who has scissors instead of hands.
Johnny 'Deep' (ej? DEPP) plays the starring role as Edward.
Edward lives in aN obscure, derelict castle.
'When someday' (nie - One day, when) AN Avon consultant Peg Boggs comes to his estate. - czy to jest cale zdanie - bo cos tu nie tak.
She meets Edward and 'she decided' DECIDES to take him to her house. She wants 'that' (niepotr) Edward TO acclimatize HIMSELF in THE town and FOR other people get to GET TO like him.
After dinner with Pegs family Edward fallS (he-3os.l.poj FALLS) in love with Pegs daughter Kim played by Winona Ryder.
Edward works 'like' (znaczy podobnie do ogrodnika i fryzjera - to co on wlasciwie robi?) a gardener and a hairdresser.
People slowly 'starts' START TO like him, but Kim's boyfriend HATES HIM MORE AND MORE every day 'more and more hates him' (nie w tym miejscu)because he seeS that Edward loves Kim.
One evening Edward 'with' AND Kim and her friends 'broke' BREAK into A house, suddenly the alarm turnS (it-3os.l.poj TURNS) ITSELF on.
Everyone escapeS, but Edward can't open a door 'with' (jakbym to zmienila na WHICH HAS) A ball handle. He escapeS from the police to his castle and the chase starts. 'Is' DOES Kim 'loves' LOVE Edward too? Can she protect him from peoples hate and prevent aN 'inhabitants' (cos tego slowa nie lube tutaj - dlaczego nie 'the villagers?' revenge?
Edward Scissorhands is well directed and 'the' (niepotr) Depp's acting is 'amaizing' (ej? popraw to blednie napisane).
The film presents 'a' THE problem OF loneliness, incomprehension and rejection
OF A “different" person.
Although, the main character is A cyborg, the film is believable and I
can thoroughly recommend it.