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"8 things about myself
1.My hobby is writting books - I wrote 8 books allready and I'm working at next
2.I had a band, but it break up 2 yers ago
3.I like doing abstract photos...principally nature
4.I love to draw pict for my books
5.I've got 3 best friends:Doris, Eliza and Sylvia
6.I love to sing - special "Hello world"
7.I'm a little big daft and crazy;p
8.I'm going to be a psychologist...cause I'm good at this"

"8 things about myself
1.My hobby is writting JEDNO T books - I wrote CZAS PRESENT PERFECT 8 books allready and I'm working at ANOTHER ONE
2.I had a band, but it break CZAS SIMPLE PAST up 2 yers ago
3.I like TAKING abstract photos...principally OF nature
4.I love to draw pictURES for my books
5.I've got 3 best friends:Doris, Eliza and Sylvia
6.I love to sing - EspecialLY "Hello world"
7.I'm a little big daft and crazy;p
8.I'm going to be a psychologist...BEcause I'm good at this"

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