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Raport :

To : John Smith
From : Mary Brown, Camp Supervisor
Subject : Report of island – package holidays
Date : 15th June 1999


INTRODUCTION
As requested, this report is an assessment of suitability island for package holidays. The report concerns issues like : place itself, how to get there, available accommodation, restaurants, transport and tourist attractions.

LOCATION AND FACILITY
This place is situated on the see, in a very nice place. It is so beautiful that everyone falls in love with it. However, it is quite difficult to get here. The accommodation is fully stocked, beginning with rooms ending with toilet and kitchen. If you visit this place with small child or children you can get extra rooms or even employ a child-minder. Tourists do not have to take anything. Everything what is needed is included. I would say that the furnishings is more developed than you need. With regard to food – it is possible to prepare own meals or visit innumerable amount of restaurants . Everyone can find something for himself because every single cuisine is served here. The staff is always friendly and extremely polite but on the other hand, they are very slow. The issue like transport is changing. Currently the nearest bus stop is 5km away from place where you live. If it is a problem for somebody , he or she can borrow a car, a bike or a scooter, did yet people during holidays usually do not take their time. Tourist attractions are wonderful. To tell the truth it is possible to not to go out during whole residence. On the spot are available : restaurants, tennis courts, swimming pools, small beaches, cinema etc. There is a possibility to borrow a tour guide for free.

RECOMMENDATION
I strongly recommend this place for everyone, particularly people who want take a real rest. The organization is excellent here. Especially, for those who do not like visiting but this place is really worth visiting.


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Czy masz jakas awersje do uzywanie slowa 'the'? Naprawde sie przydaje-bez tego, zdania sa niegram.

As requested, this report is an assessment of THE suitability OF THE island for
package holidays. The report concerns issues 'like' (nie uzywaj tego- tutaj SUCH AS): THE place itself, how to get there, THE available accommodation, restaurants, transport and tourist attractions.
'This place' (tutaj lepiej wymien albo nazwe miasta, albo resortu) is situated 'on' (ON - napewno nie, chyba NEAR) the 'see' (see to widziec, SEA-to morze), in a very nice place.
The accommodation is fully 'stocked' (uzywamy slowa furnished), 'beginning' (wolalabym including) 'with' (niepotr) rooms 'ending' (niepotr) with toilet and kitchen FACILITIES. If you visit this place with A small child or children you can get extra rooms or even employ a child-minder.
Tourists do not have to take 'anything' (anything - znaczy tez pieniadze?). Everything 'what' (prosze tego nie uzywac-to jest kalka z polskiego - tutaj THAT) is needed is included. I would say that the 'furnishings is' (ale furnishings to l. mnoga a 'is to l. poj-prosze poprawic) more
'developed' (nie za bardzo dobre slowo) than you need. With regard to food - it is possible to prepare YOUR own meals or visit THE innumerable amount of restaurants.
The staff 'is' ARE always friendly and extremely polite, but on the other hand, they 'are' (wolalabym ..appear to be) very slow. The issue 'like' OF transport is changing. Currently the nearest bus stop is 5km away from THE place where
you live. If THIS it is a problem for somebody, he or she can borrow a
car, a bike or a scooter, 'did yet people during holidays usually do
not take their time' (tego to calkowicie nie rozumiem).
To tell the truth it is possible 'to not to go out' (cos tu nie tak - not to go out) during THE whole TIME OF residence.
I strongly recommend this place for everyone, particularly FOR people who
want TO take a real rest.
Especially, for those who do not like visiting (kogo? czego?), but this place is really worth visiting.

Dziękuje :)