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Carlo can’t thought off about the mystifying girl.A few days leter excited in love Carlo resolved went back to find a beautiful unacquainted girl.On a street he met a nice old woman.When Carlo told an woman the wonderful girl: She had long blond curly hair and big green eys.This old woman when heard the Carlo’s description told curious boy the the girl used to live there but had a died a couple of years before.Carlo was staetled he can’t belive in words old woman.He started cry. Carlo was sad and he came back to home.
Three long months leter carlo went to the large cmentary.This was very breath talking moment.He put some yellow flowers on his durling mother’s grave.After that he sat on the bench and was memorising about the beautiful girl.Aa he was leaving the cmentary he saw his jacket on another grave stone.He was shocked.When he went to picked it up he saw an old photograph of the girl had given to lift to.He didn’t know what the photograph girl made at the his mother grave.This was a large mysterys

Carlo 'can't' (a czas przeszly?)(tutaj brakuje STOP) 'thought' (nie to slowo)'off' OF 'about' (niepotr) the mystifying girl. A few days 'leter' (ortog)
excited in love Carlo resolved 'went' TO GO back to find a beautiful
'unacquainted' (nie to slowo - inny register) girl.
When Carlo told 'an' THE (bo mowisz o specificznej osobie) woman (o czy,? ABOUT)the wonderful girl: She had long blond curly hair and big green 'eys' (ortog). This old woman when (ale kto - tutaj SHE) heard 'the' (a to po co?) Carlo's description told THE curious boy THAT the girl used to live there, but had 'a' (a to po co?) died a couple of years before. Carlo was 'staetled' (ortog) he 'can't' (czas przeszly) 'belive'(ortog) in THE words OF THE old woman.He
started TO cry. Carlo was sad and he came back 'to' (niepotr) home.
Three long months 'leter' (ortog) Carlo went to 'the' A large 'cmentary' Ortog).This was A very breath 'talking' (ortog) moment. He put some yellow flowers on his 'durling' (ortog) mother's grave. After that he sat on the bench and was 'memorising' (nie to slowo - tutaj REMINISCING) about the beautiful girl. As he was leaving the 'cmentary' (ortog) he saw his jacket on
another grave stone.
When he went to 'picked' PICK it up he saw an old photograph of the girl HE had given A 'to lift' (zla kol slow LIFT TO.)
....He didn't know what the photograph girl made at the his mother grave..... Tego zdania nie rozumiem... (brakuje za duzo slow)
This was a large 'mysterys' (l. poj - MYSTERY).