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Zalety i wady organizowania imprez typu Woodstock.
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Pozdrawiam.

Nowadays mass performances like Woodstock are becoming more and more popular. Young people who are seeking entertainment participate in this kind of performances more frequently. Is organizing this kind of performances good for people?

The major advantage of organizing mass performances is possibility to meet new people who have similar interests. Young people can talk and share their knowledge about their band or other subjects. What is more, people who participate in this kind of performance have a good time. They can listen to music what they like and take part in interesting events. Finally, organizing mass performances brings profits to people who lives in place where this performances were organized. People who own hotels and restaurants have many customers and local market is developing.

On the other hand, mass performances brings a great danger which are drugs and alcohol. Sometimes young people use alcohol and drugs to have more fun what can provides to accidents. Moreover, on this kind of events occur theft and robbery. Young people have easy chance to get someone wallet or mobile phone. Another disadvantage of mass performances is crowd which is danger. People who are thoughtless can be damage by the crowd, lose their health even life.

All things considered, mass performances are interesting choice for people who are seeking something new. But this kind of events brings danger like drugs or alcohol which are available without any problems.

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