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...Though I go through a crisis, I feel the reluctance/
Slowly I lose faith in my lirycs, which is faraway/
Somewhere I make a mistake I lose glitter in your eyes/
Crease on your face not the same what crease on my card/
I fall into a decline from day to day/
The days are drowing out, today sounds leave no trace/