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" Many young people decide to take a job while they are still at school .Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of such decision . "
Nowadays more and more young people decide to take a job while they are still at school . I will use the following reasons to illustrate advantages and disadvantages of this situation .
First of all , undertaking of a job by young people when they are still learn , make them more independent and responsible . The new responsibilities teach them how to manage in " the Real World " and appreciate the value of money . Another advantages is the possibility to acquire work experience . Apart from education and qualifications , employers often demand experiens from their workers . Therefore a temporary job during the studies facilitate findind a well-paid job immediately after school . Finally , a temporary job give young people money for they expenses .They can afford to buy new clothers , books , they can go to party or cimena . They may also enjoy language course or save money for holiday .
On the other hand , when they work , they do not have so much time for learning and it might have negative influence on results in studies . Furthermore , learning and working cause exhusted , overwork and stress . As a result it has a bad impact on our health .ast but not least , the income from temporary or part-time job are very small , do not even exceed < sredniej krajowej :) > . Young people have to work hard and effective and instead of that they get not much .
In conclusion , I think that when somebody is study , he has to be concetrated on studies , because it is really important . For work and earning money will be time later .